| "Torn" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: sessy's girl On: December 20, 2003 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! Its so good. It's one of the few where sessy and Kagome don't just fall in love t the drop of a hat! I love it please keep it up. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: December 09, 2003 21:51 CST
Comment/Review:
What's going to happen next? tell me!
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Reviewed By: Riomi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 18:25 CST
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to update soon cause you can't leave it like that, it's just wrong!!! i don't mind when people put lemons in their stories, but i hope you don't write it as a rape and if you are going to write it like at rape can you atleast have kagome submit or something. it's just my opinion. ^__- having one of the main characters raped just bothers me. W.T.P.
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Reviewed By: Riomi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 12:10 CST
Comment/Review:
crap
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ You've got to update before November 15th! It's my birthday on that day, and you updating would be such a nice present!
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Reviewed By: some one On: November 06, 2003 09:47 CST
Comment/Review:
fowl?
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Title: but I wont let them fall
Reviewed By: you have me in tears On: November 06, 2003 09:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice, I'm looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Riomi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 15:00 CST
Comment/Review:
hmmm
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, great chappy. can't wait for the next chapter, i hope it's befor your written date. i guessing whst rin found on the floor was the necklace, right? ^_- just wondering...Update soon, k! W.T.P. -^__^-
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Reviewed By: princess cat girl On: November 04, 2003 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far so good keep updating k and try to make them quike pleas
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Reviewed By: Riomi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 10:23 CST
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I didn't think so many people would like!
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 19:57 CST
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What are you doing leaving it like that? UPDATE! I love the story! The "secret" is the Jewel, right?! Come on tell ME! PLEASE! Adios! Ja Ne!
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Title: EvilNekoEatsYourSoul
Reviewed By: ENEYS On: November 03, 2003 18:18 CST
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Hullooooo.... I'm too lazy to log in, but I saw your update for this story and decided to check it out. I like the way you write Kagome's feelings... maybe I'm just in a depressed mood but it made me kinda sad for Kagome... which is good because that means it is well written. Anyways, I'm looking forward to the next update. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 22:54 CST
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*drool drool drool* write more oke?
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