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Reviewed By: Pyro Princess On: February 16, 2004 21:52 CST
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I just read the whole thing and it is vewy vewy well done!! I can't wait for more. It is so yummy!! =P
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Reviewed By: Valea On: February 16, 2004 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor them..Seto can be so deceiving..double damn, but anywho update soonish noonish! Yay!!!!!! It was cool, good stuff
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Reviewed By: Impi On: February 16, 2004 19:26 CST
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There where a lot of typos this chapter.
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Reviewed By: Mononoke who isn't logged in right now. On: February 16, 2004 08:41 CST
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Wow, I liked it, but the glaring spelling errors were kind of distracting. Well done, I love this story and can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 16, 2004 07:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... poor Ryou.... AGAIN! * hugs the dejected hikari * I still think Yugi's spoiled... he got Seto first!.... :) Really good chapter... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: M0N0N0KČ On: February 14, 2004 03:46 CST
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Wow, I never knew you had a strange affinity with Seto and Voyerism... It kinda freaks me out actually. But well written, and the only thing I didn't relly like was that lemon. It felt rushed and kinda hard to believe. But the rest of it more than makes up, so keep on posting! ~*~Mononoke~*~
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 17:56 CST
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Hey, would you look at that! Just add a few more people and it would be one big, giant, orge!!! YEEhheEE!!! Sorry, I had to get thought whole "YEEhheEE" thing out of my system. *clears throat* Anyways, the plot in this one is rreeeallly interesting. GOD, DAMN, DAMN YOU AND YOU.... *thinks of soemthign bad* YOUR... STORIES!!! Yeah, ya didn't see THAT one comin' did ya?
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 11, 2004 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!! Yugi's gonna' get it.... I hope it's not THAT it..... ewww...... something like.... being beaten into a bloody mass would be nice...:)
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Reviewed By: Impi On: February 06, 2004 09:32 CST
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This sounds bad....
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Reviewed By: Valea On: February 06, 2004 08:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooo! Run away! He'll beat you! DUdue...that was cool. Imagine dying over and over and over again....it just keeps going anf going liket he energizer bunny! yay! *bites nails* eeep!!!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 06, 2004 08:06 CST
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Great chapter! Poor Ryou* hugs the cute hikari* Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Impi On: February 05, 2004 14:48 CST
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Damn. Back where they started. Not either death can save them.
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Title: Wow !
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this was good, but this made it even better, though I feel sorry for Ryou and Malik, after all they went through. (Oh and Yugi too, but he was better off with Yami). Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Valea On: February 05, 2004 08:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww...so worng! i acatuly had a tear come to my eye about Tristiahn..i wonder if Ryou will get to see the light of day again to say anything...*body slams yamis* WHY WOTN YOU DIE!!!!!!! yup
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 05, 2004 07:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...... great.... you kill them of... then you bring them back to life, even though they would have been better off DEAD! ........Well... Yugi's just a brat... and he should be happy... bat Malik and Ryou!.......... You... you evil, evil Bakurasgirl! * looks annoyed, then suddenly hugs you tightly* Thank you Thank you Thank you!!!!!!!!
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