| "What Doesn't Kill You" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kaye7 On: March 25, 2004 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By far the best fic I've read in my LIFE. I love the suspense at the end of the chapters, but I wanna know what happend to Seto! Keep updating!
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Merciful Sky On: February 09, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*screams* Oh, you are so evil!!! Um...yeah, I started reading this fic, like, four days ago and haven't reviewed...probably because by the time I finish it's so late. I'm so sorry for that! But seriously, this fic is amazing and has so many twists....I was definately NOT expecting Seto to be arrested! Very interesting indeed. And just out of curiosity, will Seto and Tea's past-selves ever come through?? (Since that bit with Bakura in the hospital just HAD to be forshadowing...?) Oh, wow! I ramble. (PS: I joined your awesome Seto/Anzu fanlisting!) *Huggles* Merciful Sky
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Reviewed By: Insuma On: February 08, 2004 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SETO GETS ARRESTED!!!!!!!! OMG thats so weird but, kool. lol. This is the BEST fanfic ever. mine was dumb ur's is kool. I wish i could wright as good as u.
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Reviewed By: winterwing3000 On: February 06, 2004 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think its great! please do continue.... i just hope kaiba would be out of "guilt" charges soon.... its too sad to see him go to jail.... hope you update soon! i'm too eager to wait!
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Reviewed By: winterwing On: January 03, 2004 12:45 CST
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i sooo luv it! wish you could add more though.. hope you would consider writing a sequel to it :)
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Reviewed By: Setasweetheart On: November 02, 2003 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great i loved it please update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Melody_to_another_Day On: October 29, 2003 17:29 CST
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I think you're the forth best writer on MM.org 1)salior star universe 2)sailor cherry star 3)sakura istar
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Reviewed By: Mimiheart [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read in any fandom. You've done your homework on the characterizations. I never would have thought of Tea/Kaiba working under any circumstances, and you've done it beautifully, and kept them both in character! (My biggest complaint in fanfic is OOC.) You write well, your grammar is some of the best I've seen on this site. I'm pointing this out because you seem like the type of person who cares about using the correct words: it's a cumberbun, not cummerbund. (I think that's what you had written, whatever it was it was incorrect.) One more thing, I've seen this a lot lately, and it's a word I had never seen before, "sweatdropped." It isn't in any dictionary I've seen and I have no idea what it means. You've used it a couple of times, can you help out with a definition of it? Also, how is Chieko pronounced? Once again, keep up the good work, I can't wait to read the rest!
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Reviewed By: isishikage On: October 26, 2003 17:32 CST
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Love the latest 2 chapters!! I esp liked the part where Chieko mistook Kaiba for her brother, lol!! ^^ Like the banners? I do have better ones if you want more! Ja ne, isishikage
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Title: woah Oo
Reviewed By: YamiCrystalline (still not logged in ^^;; ) On: October 23, 2003 18:29 CDT
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This story is awesome - I can't wait to see more of it.
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Reviewed By: Amor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 17:22 CDT
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Wow...everyone is IC, and you really manage to get into a character's head. Not to mention that you write fast too. (That may be the kiss of death...the last author I said that to in a review hasn't updated since. ^_^) Keep it up
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Reviewed By: isishikage On: October 22, 2003 14:36 CDT
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Like the latest chapter!! My fave part was the dancing. Great site! Here are links of two good Kira screencaps: http://campus.fortunecity.com/french/561/AS/ep3/epi3-27.jpg http://campus.fortunecity.com/french/561/AS/ep3/epi3-31.jpg isishikage
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 21:56 CDT
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Hey this is really good. Keep it going! Is this an Anzu/Seto fanfic? It'd like it to be! I haven't read one before... :P keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Amor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 08:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice angsty fic. Most of the characters seem pretty IC. You're probably the best YGO writer I've read on Mediaminer (and I completely agree with your stance on the rampant slash.)
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