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Reviewed By: (Weissangel24) On: October 01, 2005 08:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T-T Your muse just likes to torture us! ::sighs:: it's a good thing, I guess... builds up the excitement of the impending birth! >__< I can't wait! I'm nearly bouncing off the walls with anticipation! ::snickers:: Quatre and buttons... Poor Trowa, he wasn't warned. ^__^ Great chappy! Don't take too long in updating! I think my head is going to explode from a long wait! ^-^ W.A.24
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Reviewed By: dannyefee On: October 01, 2005 04:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter. I know it's not up to me, but what's the sex of the baby? Was it already said in the previous chapters? I'm sorry but your story is so long...lol...I don't remember. I hope it's a boy. Everyone wants girls these days. I'm sorry...I know it's not my choice. Oh well.
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Reviewed By: kimpisces(not signed in) On: October 01, 2005 01:13 EDT
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YES!!!!!! Sunshine is going to be born!!!!!!!!!!! *claps her hands in excitement* You'd better update soon though hehehehe I can't wait *goes and dances off* ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 05:19 EDT
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What the heck is wrong with Sally?! You don't leave your patient at a critical time like this! She could have administered the epidural while Nurse brown went to get the guys. Why she's standing there chit chatting doing could have another contraction! you can never tell with them especially the baby pressing down so hard and Duo's body not being use to labor of giving birth. I doubt any mother is with their first child and with first one, there are always worries of complications. *shakes head* and Sally said she didn't like what she was seeing that the pressure was too much and she would leave like that... *growls*.... *huggles Shenlong* Thank you for your devotion to the story and your readers! Please write more!!!
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Reviewed By: nhaia On: September 28, 2005 23:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it's not fair, i'm on tenetrhooks here you know!!! When poor duo will deliver his baby???? Don't be cruel with us, we are waiting for that part desperately...
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Reviewed By: Bec On: September 27, 2005 16:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ahhh! They were so close! The way you're writing this I don't suppose the baby will be born next chapter...not that I'm complaining! You're doing a fantastic job! I don't really mind the cliffies, I think I kinda enjoy the suspense. ^_^ Anyways, keep it up!
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Title: T-T
Reviewed By: (Weissangel24) On: September 27, 2005 09:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T-T You're just dragging this out as far as you can to torture us, aren't you. Well, I'll have you know it's working! I'm going crazy with anticipation! Update soon! Otherwise I'll be carted away and they don't allow computers in the white padded rooms!
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Reviewed By: Gabbi22 On: September 27, 2005 09:21 EDT
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I love this fic to distraction, but if you're gonna describe each small step of the way, they're going to have their baby by chapter 150, and I know you like details, but this chiffhangers are getting all too annoying! Seriously! Please don't keep doing this to us!
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Title: Laughing and crying all the way
Reviewed By: XinnLagjin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was shit'n kittens reading this story. Its not only funny its informative and I enjoyed every momment of it. How are Yuy and Maxwell gonna raise the child and not to mention is it gonna be a bou or a girl? But most importantly what will be the name? All the questions are giving me a headache so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: kimpisces (not signed in) On: September 23, 2005 09:10 EDT
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Phone Sally quickly or break in...I don't care but Heero better get to Duo asap!!! ugh...I want to say sunshine born lol ..update soon *huggles* ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Sammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm On: September 21, 2005 17:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!!!! lmao I love this story.=)
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 19:45 EDT
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ch119 *screams* i don't think i handle suspense very well... *falls out of chair* Man things are getting intense on Duo's end and *snickers* it just works that Wuffers would take on Duo's devil may care atitude to get Heero to Duo. Man I LOVE this STORY!!! *huggles you* can't wait!!!
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Reviewed By: Bec On: September 20, 2005 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. I knew Wufei was going to steal a car, I just didn't know it was going to be a cop car! Not surprising that he has road rage, though... Anyway, this was a great chapter! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: kimpisces (not signed in) On: September 20, 2005 08:57 EDT
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*chuckles* That last part amused me. Wufei has road rage!!! lolol ....*shakes her head* Anyway, on to the more serious stuff....Heero better get his ass there in time for the baby birthing !!!! Poor Duo and sunshine though *sniffles* Come on guys you can do it!!! Update soon *huggles* ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: (Weissangel24) On: September 20, 2005 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! Why are you draging this out so much! I'm going loco with the tension and suspense! LOL I loved the criminal Chang Wu Fei and his partner in crime, Quatre the kid! I'm still laughing at those parts! Poor Hiiro! I know that they mean well, trying to get him there in time, but it doesn't do any good if they get wrapped around a tree! and Duo and Trowa would personally drag their sorry a**es back from the grave so that they can kick them for breaking promises... I'm rambling... anyway, I look foreward to an update- So don't make it too long of a wait! ^-^ Ja
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