| "Balineses Orchid" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 17:13 CST
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Sorry for not replying for such along time. I was not in the mood for reading fics. Keep going, ne. It's still the lovely fic I used to know ^_^! Luv it.
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Title: kaoru-misao
Reviewed By: kaoru-misao [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 14:10 CST
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love this!! please don't stop writing! please! you got me hooked. wonder what will happen to yohji? this is gonna be a sad fic huh? luv ya!
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Reviewed By: saturnssavior [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 23:03 CST
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 18:04 CST
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Well, here I am ^__^...*sigh* at first I wanted to go to bed and read it the next day (it's late you know^^) BUT I COULDN'T resist *grin*!!! Ah, Aya and his "sword" I LOVE Katanas *gets dreamy eyes*...I saw one in TV and all that were running through my head was "aaahhhh Katana...*sigh* want to have on too...want one want one want one..." *giggle*. I'm looking forward to the sparring show between Yohji and Aya. *Phew* that was fast ^_^, I didn't expect the next chap to be out that soon ^_^...GREAT! Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: NekoHope [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 20:11 CST
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Alright. I really like the way the story is going, though it could use some beta-ing before it's posted. You're going quickly, which is great for the people who want to read the story, but having a beata would make the story so much better. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 18:28 CST
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Hhm, BEAUTIFUL and sad of course! I liked this sentence: "You should never lower your gaze at someone, it gives them the authority to treat you like dirt." ^_^ And their kiss...oh you have a very good style in describing that scenes...and of course the "thing" afterwards...wow ^_^...pure emotions! Oh and the little embarrassing "mistake" Aya happened was...well, it's normal, isn't it...he never had Sex (when I remember right^^;;)...such things happen ^_~. *pats Ayas head* you don't have to be embarrassed Ayan ^_^. I LOVE it, so...hope to read more soon! Wah I'm one of your number one fans O_O...I'm flattered, I really am! ^_^ Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: SisterRaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 01:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Dang...reading this makes me want to hang up my pencil in shame. How dare I call myself an author when there are people like you writing?Usually, I don't like dramatic/ slightly angsty stories, but this is a notable exception. I long to hear more about poor Yohji-kun, and see how Aya handles the news. Please, keep going with this story.
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 12:52 CST
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Wah, all I can say is...KEEP GOING, I still like it! Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 21:50 CDT
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OK, here you are ^-^! *Siiiighh* a wonderfully written chapter, again. Yohji, what for naughty naughty dreams you have, be ashamed ^____~ *giggle*. Hhm, I wonder if Yohji will die O_O...I hope NOT...we'll see. OH HAPPY BIRTHDAY (I know you had it already...but I don't know how to say it in English...I'm German ^.^). Ja *next please^^* Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: NekoHope [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 17:07 CDT
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Really cute!!! Can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 13:55 CDT
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Waaahh, now that's great, I already wrote you a comment on FF.net and now you've posted the third part on MM.org ^_____^ GREAT! Hhm, I don't know how I will handle it with the commies, but I think I will switch between MM.org and FF.net ^_^...it depends on where you've posted the latest chap ^______^, OK? Well, what can I say...IT WAS FANTASTIC ^_^...ooohhh I LOVED the scene with Yohji and Aya in the kitchen. Oh, and this scene was great^^: "Oh and Ayasan one more thing" Aya looked up "what's that?" he asked. "just this" *Giggle* WOW O_O....brilliant ^______^ and HOT HOT HOT ^________^! Keep going, ne ^.^! Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: cat n kitten On: October 14, 2003 17:02 CDT
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ooooooh me LOVE ooooh is aya-kun the uke ^.^ hehe i hope so -cheesy grin- yes yes
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Reviewed By: NekoHope [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 21:34 CDT
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It looks like it'll turn out interesting! Why do I get the feeling it's going to be a sad fic.....?
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Title: Cat n Kitten
Reviewed By: Jack Off Jill [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 19:35 CDT
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must.write.more! hehe do keep it up aww yohji isnt gonna die is he?? eep poor aya everyone needs him for something
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Reviewed By: Trinity Bennett [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 21:39 CDT
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Hmm.. This looks to be an interesting plot you have. I like your style of writing too. Keep it up!
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