| "Forever Pain" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lani On: January 16, 2004 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! hahaha mija! right when i finished reviewing, you updated! haha-weird ne? okay-no more laughing...it hurts..my heart hurts..*sob* the guy i like that liked me wouldnt talk to me cause he was talking ot his gf...that made me cry...T.T wah! *okay lani, shut UP!* *sigh i hate me* neways, this was good hun! ccant wait for you to update...again..*giggles* -Sly
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lani On: January 16, 2004 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey mija! long time huh? sorry, been busy, ya know problems n stuff. Good chapter though! i need a personal assistant too...T.T too many things...gah! well, this was wonderful! keep up the good work and i cant wait for your next update! -Sly
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Title: Oh my!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal[not logged in] On: January 11, 2004 17:18 CST
Comment/Review:
AHHHH!!!! YOU UPDATED! WAI! Hmm... I think that their thoughts were a good thing to include right now... Jingle is SO cool!!!! Buh-bye Hojo!!! Nya! ^^ Keep on going, eagerly awaiting your next update! Tanya
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lani On: January 07, 2004 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! wow-good job! I likeJingo. hes really cool! ^^ im glad Kags has him. And i feekl sorry foir her. cause she doesnt want to be a burden, but we all need help sometimes. we cant face all the pain alone. neways, goos job@ cant wait for you to update! -Sly
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lani On: January 04, 2004 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey look! im finally back! Sly is back! haha-im crazy...oh my...i-i cant believe your dad threw u in closets...um...dont mean to pry, but...did you really go into trances? well, this was good! really good! sorry havent reviewed forever, been sick...n skul starts tomorrow! *cries* ya noe, this last chapter really made me cry...man...wellz, good job! Cant wait for u to update again, but take your time! -Sly
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: December 31, 2003 11:24 CST
Comment/Review:
oh good they're gonna get her out! phew i thought she was gonna get into alota trouble! *phew!*
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: December 29, 2003 14:35 CST
Comment/Review:
ohhhhh noooooooooooooooo... who's gonna bail her ouuuuuuuuut... Hojo's gonna geeeeeet her.... that isn't goooooood... AHHHHH! this is so scary! its like a horror movie!!! *backs into a corner, and whimpers*
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Reviewed By: Monica On: December 27, 2003 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyou totally deserved wat she got. that bitch, 4 this stori anywayz. I can't belieave sum of di s stuff actually happened to you!! No offense or any thing but at least u nno u don't live a boring life rite?
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lani On: December 19, 2003 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey!!!! its me, sly....darn mm.org wont let me sign in, so im signing as Lani from now on okay...well, this was a wonderful chapter! oh my! im glad Kagome got Kikyou baq!!! i dont really hate Kikyou nemore, but she deserved it in dis fic!!!! *shakes fist at kikyou* *sigh* wellpz, this was a real good chapter hun! i cant wait for the enxt one, but take your time!! n happy holidays!!!! -Lani
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Title: WOW! One word is all it takes.....
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 08:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word is all it takes......... wow! I love this story....... but these were around the lines of your life experiences............ Poor you!!! *huggles* flick of the fingers makes it go away.... *sigh* if only life were that simple. *perks* Great job though! I think that this story is really believable because people don't just fall completely for a guy when they were beaten and raped.... sad truth but that is one of the factors that make this story great! A few spelling errors, but I'm not one to talk... I'm sure that I have quite a few in my fanfics too........ I'll be updating my fic after school tonight. *sweatdrops, because it has been a month since updated last... or was it two?* Meh, I'm updating... finally.... DON'T SAY THAT YOUR PEOM ON THIS STORY SUCKS, BECAUSE IT DOESN'T!! I had tears in my eyes when I finished reading the poem. BTW: I've added you to my fav authors and Forever Pain to my fav stories... you deserve it! I'll read all of them and leave a review for each! Bye for now... Tanya
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: December 15, 2003 18:20 CST
Comment/Review:
dude...she got thrown in jail for punching Kikyou in the nose? weird...
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Reviewed By: Monica On: December 08, 2003 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I though ur story was awsome please keep hurry and finish the next chapter!
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 *cant sign in* On: December 03, 2003 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey! good chapter hun! i like how you told us how they feel! And again-im soooo sorry that this happened to you! *hugs you* but, im glad that your sort of getting over it! Also, im glad ya updated! This is a wonderful fic, and again, im sorry this happened to you! But, i hope you will completely get over it and take your time with the next chapter okayz! -Lani
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: December 03, 2003 14:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I WANT FLUFF!
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Title: lo!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya! good chappie! i liked it lots! damn Kikyo bitch! but-im glad Naraku didnt take Kagome! i hope he gets a lil punishment, for not stopping it, but nothing very bad, cuz he didnt participate in it, ya know wut i mean? wellz, good job! cant wait for the next chapter, n i hope u get better soon! uve been sick for quite a while-i hope nuthin serious! take care! -Lani
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