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Reviewed By: Monica On: December 27, 2003 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyou totally deserved wat she got. that bitch, 4 this stori anywayz. I can't belieave sum of di s stuff actually happened to you!! No offense or any thing but at least u nno u don't live a boring life rite?
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lani On: December 19, 2003 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey!!!! its me, sly....darn mm.org wont let me sign in, so im signing as Lani from now on okay...well, this was a wonderful chapter! oh my! im glad Kagome got Kikyou baq!!! i dont really hate Kikyou nemore, but she deserved it in dis fic!!!! *shakes fist at kikyou* *sigh* wellpz, this was a real good chapter hun! i cant wait for the enxt one, but take your time!! n happy holidays!!!! -Lani
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Title: WOW! One word is all it takes.....
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 08:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word is all it takes......... wow! I love this story....... but these were around the lines of your life experiences............ Poor you!!! *huggles* flick of the fingers makes it go away.... *sigh* if only life were that simple. *perks* Great job though! I think that this story is really believable because people don't just fall completely for a guy when they were beaten and raped.... sad truth but that is one of the factors that make this story great! A few spelling errors, but I'm not one to talk... I'm sure that I have quite a few in my fanfics too........ I'll be updating my fic after school tonight. *sweatdrops, because it has been a month since updated last... or was it two?* Meh, I'm updating... finally.... DON'T SAY THAT YOUR PEOM ON THIS STORY SUCKS, BECAUSE IT DOESN'T!! I had tears in my eyes when I finished reading the poem. BTW: I've added you to my fav authors and Forever Pain to my fav stories... you deserve it! I'll read all of them and leave a review for each! Bye for now... Tanya
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: December 15, 2003 18:20 CST
Comment/Review:
dude...she got thrown in jail for punching Kikyou in the nose? weird...
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Reviewed By: Monica On: December 08, 2003 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I though ur story was awsome please keep hurry and finish the next chapter!
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 *cant sign in* On: December 03, 2003 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey! good chapter hun! i like how you told us how they feel! And again-im soooo sorry that this happened to you! *hugs you* but, im glad that your sort of getting over it! Also, im glad ya updated! This is a wonderful fic, and again, im sorry this happened to you! But, i hope you will completely get over it and take your time with the next chapter okayz! -Lani
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: December 03, 2003 14:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I WANT FLUFF!
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Title: lo!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya! good chappie! i liked it lots! damn Kikyo bitch! but-im glad Naraku didnt take Kagome! i hope he gets a lil punishment, for not stopping it, but nothing very bad, cuz he didnt participate in it, ya know wut i mean? wellz, good job! cant wait for the next chapter, n i hope u get better soon! uve been sick for quite a while-i hope nuthin serious! take care! -Lani
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(not signed in) On: November 10, 2003 18:58 CST
Comment/Review:
i definatley like the new chapter
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Title: lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 10:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! goooooood job! dun wanna type 2 much cuz my bro ish asleep...very grumpy wen awoke! i think u did a wonderful description of the place! it sounds soooooo beautiful! i cant wait to see what happens! How is yash gonna make kag want him? eep! must wait to find out ne? goood joooob! update wen u gots da time! =Lani
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee! YAY! yash admitted his feelings....even if it is to himself...lol. that was a very good chapter, n i dun tink it took dat long...well, ive been pretty busy so i wouldn't noe...o.O damn skul..im paranoind with loss of sleep! eep! well, ne way, i ramble, sooooo good job Oh Great Authoress! i LOVE this story n am SOOOO glad you are making this story, but am SOOO sorry that it happened to you and that u r still sick! damn sicknessez....well, take your time to recover and update en u can ok! hugs hugs hugs! -Lani
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee! YAY! You got other reviewers!!!! good job! and im SOOO sorry, that happened to ya! omg! thats just...terrible! and i still dont think it was your fault! im sorry! *hugs hugs hugs! Candy candy candy!* well, im glad your over it and im sorry that sometimes it comes back to you!!! oh my! *hugs again!* well, this was really good! yup...writing is my outlet too sumtimes! ^-^ damnn brother and family ya know! sigh, well, good job! i hope ya update soon, but take all da time ya need okay! -Lani
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Title: nooooo whyed you stop!!!!!
Reviewed By: princessann On: November 02, 2003 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
noo please continue ill be waiting thanks and e-mail me when you update at acyoung28@hotmail.com!! see you then!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko (not signed in!) On: November 01, 2003 10:45 CST
Comment/Review:
hey kule story but when kyoto and kagome go to the penthouse kagome should have her nightmare and tell kyoto about her childhood. that would be really good!!!
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon this story is awsome and if u dont update soon i waill send sessy to make you write a new chapter
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