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Title: Sex ToyS
Reviewed By: ShInIgAmITsUnAmI On: November 16, 2003 20:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Juss wanted to let you know that i like the fic and wanted you to continue!!!....now ill stop intruding on your life...heehee
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Title: I wuv u anyway...
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
... You again. *glare* You still haven't finished 'Demon in the forest' or 'Trapped Beauty' *glare* You'll get no praise from me. I like the Heero uke stories you do, but I have a feeling you won't finish this one either. I think you did another one about Duo in chains and Heero his souless slave, is that right? Did you delete it? *glare* I got your number miss, 666.
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Reviewed By: Chibi Shamps [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 07:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah! That is so hot!!! Please, please, please continue!!! More Hee-chan torture ^____^ Other than the grammar and the occassional spelling mistakes, I can't find anything wrong with this and the mistakes definitely don't detract the enjoyment factor so please continue!!!
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Reviewed By: evilchild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please please please please please finish!!!!! I want more!!!
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Title: HOT!!!!
Reviewed By: Chinoumi_TheCrimsonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmmmmmmm...... good.... hentai does the body good. X3 motto! motto! I agree, Herro shuold try all the toys. XD How about a vibrator in his too-sensitive nipples. I love Duo. - Hentai Shinigami
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Reviewed By: Avalon12 On: October 13, 2003 20:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Grammar is confusing. Other-wise, this is one hot fic! *fans herself*
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Reviewed By: Shu-chan On: October 12, 2003 19:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
o_O Wow. That was... poor Heero!! ^^ Like TurtleFire said!! ^^
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Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your Heero torture is excellent! The fic is long and throughoutly enjoyable. Please have Heero try 'all' of the toys and describe to us fans in detail!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 15:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
damn...ur grammer gets confusing at times but damn...i liked it...i guess im more hentai than i thot
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