| "Quoth The Rayvin" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: Ominee
Reviewed By: Om On: June 02, 2004 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey in your Review you mentioned Necromancer.( someone has been read Lirael,Sabriel, and Abhosen I guess nice chapter.
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon On: May 30, 2004 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU'RE ONLY 14!!!!!!!!!! God I wish I could write like you . Not only is the plot GREAT but it is so well writen that untill I saw your age I thought an adult had written it. I thought she wanted to kill Yusuke at first but I did figure out that Karasu was her brother before you told us. Well done and please keep going. You could be a pro writer if you really wanted to!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Midnightdream51 On: April 27, 2004 20:38 CDT
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Yay!!!!! Oh I really like this! Ha! Oh, and I'm not a Rayvin-hater - I actually sympathize with her(I know, I know, TECHNICALLY I could be arrested by the YYH-obessed police squad on the count of treason, but hey!). I like the many relations (wow, does SHE have connections!). And I absolutely cannot wait till you continue. ^_^ Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 14:37 CST
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AMAI!!!!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 02:16 CST
Comment/Review:
That was great! please keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Accember On: December 20, 2003 09:27 CST
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Hey, I love your story! ^.^ I like the way Rayvin fits into the story so well. I know you just updated, but please do so again soon, and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai (not logged in) On: December 19, 2003 19:41 CST
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I like this fic, for three reasons. 1. it has my favorite work of Poe in it. 2. it talks about necromancers which I find extremely cool. And 3. you don't take that long to update it (or rather recently anyway) keep up the good work and I hope you update again soon!!! Eirwen Lai
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 08:41 CST
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Yugioh Bishies- Happy B-day to ChaosMage!!! Happy B-day to ChaosMage!!! Hap- PP- That's quite enough. Anywho, good chappie... /(_ _)\ Plz don't kill Hiei... I'll die without him... Hiei- 0.0U kill me, please... Please... PP- ^_^ Hiei- 0.0U I am in so much trouble...
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Reviewed By: Maho [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story, its a very good mystery but, I think I know who Rayvins brother was. You said her brother gave her compassion and then left her, getting himself killed, and since she wants to get revenge on Kurama, my guess is that her brother is Kuronue. But this is only a guess. Anyways I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 09:20 CST
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OOOOOOOoooooo, creepy.... I like it. sounds like something that I would write. Keep going.... /shivers/ I love that poem by Poe.
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Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 18:04 CST
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Do I really need to rate it? I'd give it all 10s anyway. So here's the deal. Happy birthday and thanks for letting us know who she wanted to kill. For a while I thought it was Hiei till I read the first paragraph in ch.2. Can't wait for you to update! Eirwen Lai
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover On: November 06, 2003 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, i love your fic. Honestly...i cant wait to read more. Write as soon as you can okay? PLEEEEEEEEEEASE? I want to know reeeeeealy badly who the one she wants revenge on is. So please, for mine and the other readers who BOTHERED to review, write as quickly as you can. sorry if you found that rude.
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Reviewed By: Savitri On: October 27, 2003 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story's off to a great start. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: EirwenLai On: October 14, 2003 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay you updated! I like where this is going, no seriously! While personally I am not a fan of Kuwabara's I guess if he does something useful I won't mind him coming back to life. Can't wait for you to update again! Eirwen Lai
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Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that first part actually gave me chills. I like the way you write and I hope the next chapter comes soon. Eirwen Lai
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