| "Changing partners" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Title: Love more lemon
Reviewed By: imstupidpervert On: December 09, 2003 17:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Well this story is great but you don't have much lemon here. You should put your story is rated R. So if you want this to be NC-17 you should probably think about letting Serenity have sex more with Hiei. Explain more in Kurama and Yukina's lemon. That would be great. BUt nice story though. So you know i am a pervert so please put more lemon! I LOVE LEMON!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Footsie! On: December 09, 2003 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
"WHATeVA! That story is good but whats up with everyone crying all the time? THAT'S JUST FREAKIN WIERD. WHAT'S WITH THE SONG? "rolls eyes"
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Title: Yah!
Reviewed By: sesshomaruismine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 18:09 CST
Comment/Review:
yah desperado perfect yah who ho!
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Reviewed By: DICKS On: December 06, 2003 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okthis is boring. Where are the titty's? come on we need more hentai here!!!!!!!!!! CORNY TOO!!!
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Reviewed By: Im a anime On: December 06, 2003 17:05 CST
Comment/Review:
*holds heart* awwww that was soooosweet! with Desperado! Update! I hope serenity and DUke endup together. KILL TEA!!!!
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Title: Stupid
Reviewed By: Doop_loopy On: December 06, 2003 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
WHat's yourproblem? Now your arresting Kaiba? GOSH! The desperado song sounds so stupid in your story!
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Title: Sad
Reviewed By: Littleittybittymayo On: December 06, 2003 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* sniff* that was so sad and very touching with the song DEsperado. I was crying on that part. Please update! I love this story!
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Reviewed By: Moon Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sweatdrop*
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angel_2891 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 20:19 CST
Comment/Review:
oooooooooo.DESPERADO!!!!!!!!lol.UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 17:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Whoa...... KEWL!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: im a anime! On: December 03, 2003 12:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi this story is great please update. I heard its taking months for you to update. PLEASEE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Goochi goochi On: December 03, 2003 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU SUCK!!!!
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Chibipheobie! On: December 03, 2003 12:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi this story was great and all but i didn't like the reason Seto got arrested. I mean do you hate Kaiba or what? Well update soon! It was pretty good!^_^
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Title: Uhhhhhhhh
Reviewed By: AnimeALLday [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI! THAT STORY IS KINDA bOrINg BUT I HAVE A feELING IT'LL gET EXCITing
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: reddragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 23:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Update, Update, Update, Update!! Plzzzz!! soooo good!
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