"Betrayel of a different kind" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: TechnicalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 03:40 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: UPDATE>>> i started reading this on ff.net. so good. UPDATE
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Reviewed By: Vampire Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 14:00 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Nice story! hope you update soon! one question is Yami a vampire or is he a hunter and why didn't he bite Yugi? Vampire Inuyasha
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Title: Dark Angel 101 Reviewed By: Dark Angel 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 21:10 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Really good but for real why didin't u make Yami/ Yugi as good as the other ones. Anyway i dont care as long as u update im happy. OK update PPPPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEEEE i love stories with vamps. and such. PLEASE UPDATE ^_^ *_- HE HE HE
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Reviewed By: FireAngel_Sakura On: December 07, 2003 13:41 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I always had a thing for vampire hunters and so this story is really good and interesting.Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 10:06 CST Comment/Review: hi! wow this is really good! i enjoy the plot. pls continue
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel 101 On: November 30, 2003 14:21 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this fic. very good. PPPPLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEE UPDATE ASAP i dont want Yami to be sad he's so cute. Anyway please update, PLEASE ^_^ *_-
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Title: .... Reviewed By: ~Samara Morgan~ On: November 10, 2003 20:56 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love vampy fics. Have you read the Anne Rice books? Whenever i read them, i kinda switch those charrys with the Yugioh charrys. Its perty kool actually. Good ideas for fics. Any way, i love this fic, so plz write the next chapter!For Yami's sake!
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Reviewed By: Flying Trinket On: November 03, 2003 02:24 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ^_^ Kewl. Now let's hope you update this!! And BTW, your fic has a nice, lemony flavour! Just try not to go overboard, k? I wanna be able to read all of this without... well ya know... And there were some parts I really liked, like the bit with the BMW shining 'in all its glory' Heh. Also I've noticed you like to dress the guys in leather. O.o* And its kinda weird with you lusting after them in the middle of the fanfic. Only I will decide if Kaiba was sexy or not!!! BTW its great how your description is really cool in the places where it counts. (Do I REALLY care what the room looks like?) You certainly have come a long way since the days of "He can see things really really far" Anyway, this is kinda random, but I really like your fanfic and hope you continue with it. Even if it is just Yami and Yugi.... I want more Ryou. And maybe in your next story you can put Malik. He's pretty cool.
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Reviewed By: Dark Selene On: October 31, 2003 13:17 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Here's where I ask for some YY/Y.... I'M WAITIN!!!!!!!!!! (not so patiently but i am) UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDAT E!UPDATE!UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Saiyan_Kitsune_Foxfire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 22:58 CDT Comment/Review: Great chapter, please update soon.~SKF
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Reviewed By: Bobble [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 19:29 CDT Comment/Review: You saved the Yami/Yugi pairing for last on purpose didn't you? hehe.... They are so cute! Please update sooon!
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Reviewed By: Dark Selene On: October 23, 2003 15:58 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ***sighs*** The things I do to keep Yami happy!**hugs Yami** Nah! I liked the fic a lot and I REALLY wanna see some YY/Y (they r so cute! n_n) wonder what special ability does Yuugi have???
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Reviewed By: Saiyan_Kitsune_Foxfire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 07:06 CDT Comment/Review: This is a really great fic. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Zinx On: October 14, 2003 23:20 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Love your story please keep on writing . If you like I reviwe could everytime you update if you don't want me to just tell me next time you write . Parrings are great , cool plot just please keep on writing I read to many stories wrote by BAKAS who would never up date.
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Reviewed By: Zinx On: October 14, 2003 23:19 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Love your story please keep on writing . If you like I could everytime you update if you don't want me to just tell me next time you write . Parrings are great , cool plot just please keep on writing I read to many stories wrote by BAKAS who would never up date.
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