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Reviewed By: Rw On: August 21, 2004 22:36 CDT
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Pretty good so far. You do need a spellchecker though.
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Reviewed By: Noviah On: January 15, 2004 14:36 CST
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Review = update, so update! In case I'm too vague, I enjoyed your fic immenseley and am hoping for more!! Please?
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Reviewed By: coregium On: January 09, 2004 21:58 CST
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oh oh oh oh oh! write more! i'm an impatient person...just to let you know. really awesome story. Absolutely loved it!
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Reviewed By: coregium On: January 06, 2004 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic..please write more...I want to know what happens!
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Title: Ch 1-4
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 10:37 CST
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I like the very very slow progression of Heero and Duo's relationship. Duo has only had one little instance of a fleeting attraction to Heero, and it actually is quite believable that way. As for his desire to spend time with Heero, well, that works on more than one level. I actually thought it was rather...prophetic, perhaps, that Heero quoted an excerpt from the love letter Duo wrote as a joke on Wufei. It was a good way to start off the sequel. I actually thought that Trowa, of all people, might have been the one to let Duo know what the dress code for the Christmas dinner would be. His questioning Duo about whether Solo was his boyfriend was a good way to introduce his casual acceptance of same-sex relationships - and perhaps enough to plant the seed in Duo's mind for later. I know that it remains to be seen, but I would like to see him end up with Quatre in the end, now that he has time to see people for who they are inside instead of what they have in the bank. Especially after that little incident in the prequel where he made a big stink of Duo's picking Quatre for the team. What else? I am, of course, curious as to the cause of Heero's black eye, and I wonder about his dislike of Christmas and what brought him to the orphanage from Japan. There is a lot of potential in this story. You don't have to respond or answer anything...I am not expecting you to tell me anything since I will see things as they unfold in the story.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 19, 2003 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every time I see an update from you I jump for joy ..I say to my self cool another update some thing good to read ..Ok so I can be silly but that doesn't change the fact I love your stories ,All of them and I'm very happy when you update..It is nice to sit in front of the computer after a hard day and be able to read your great stories and find out what silly thing Duo did today or who Heero threatened to kill or what animal Trowa tamed or who Wufei yelled at or who Quatre helped.. So thank you for all the great stories you have written and I look forward to each and every update your fan... TTFN PATTY 40
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 19, 2003 14:05 CST
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Ok, that was unexpected. What could have possibly gone wrong? You have to update soon and keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 19, 2003 14:05 CST
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Ok, that was unexpected. What could have possibly gone wrong? You have to update soon and keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 05, 2003 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I can't wait to find out what Heero will get for Duo. Keep up the good job. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 28, 2003 15:48 CST
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I like this chapter but where are my Heero and Dou moments? Update soon and keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: Shu-chan On: October 28, 2003 15:13 CST
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Wow. This is pretty amazing. But I wonder what is going to happen! Is Zechs going to find Solo? I thought Zechs let Solo go though if he turned in everyone else? (Maybe I read it worng... -_- I do that) Anywho, I enjoy this! I can't wait to see the next chapter!! ^_^
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Title: WOHOO!
Reviewed By: KuraiMoon On: October 28, 2003 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And again a great chapter! i can wait to see more of it! keep it up ^^!
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Title: A new future
Reviewed By: KuraiMoon On: October 25, 2003 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is pretty cool! I hope 1x2 is coming up soon, cuz i cant wait to see it! and for some reason i feel sorry for Tro-man :( ANNYWAY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 21, 2003 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Dou checking Heero's butt! Now that's what good chapters are made off. ;) Keep up the great job and update soon.
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Title: battousai
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 13:20 CDT
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when are heero and duo gonna get together? is q-man and tro-man gonna get together?
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