| "There I Was" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: DeathDagger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2015 09:23 PDT
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I have spent years looking for this story I read long ago. It
didn't end happy and was a bit ooc but I'm glad I was able to find
and read it again.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: matchoupitchounette On: September 25, 2004 23:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i havent read all of your story.... i'm goind to read teh rest of it tomorow... i juste loved the pea story, its an old russian folklorik story.... my grandmother used to read it to me, and i was surprised to see it in your story...there isn't lot of people who know that one
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Title: secrets
Reviewed By: Secrets [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 06:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok im totally confused , kagome n sessh had two kids , then when they went to the future they found shippo? adopted him ? n he wqas sick n dying?? email me !!!!!!!! yasminmiranda@comcast.net i got the ending meaning i udertsnad the happy ending about shippo being with his parents n all after death . good idea.
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Reviewed By: ryoko imai On: July 09, 2004 11:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa ^__^ First of all, Arigatou for such a wonderful story. When I first started to read this stroy, I think it was Wednesday, July 7, anyways...I was sad because of Shippo's condition. Seriously, I wanted to cry because Shippo is the cutest and most adoreable character, I he is my favorite demon, beside Sesshoumaru. I was like, that can't be happening to him . Well, I was completely hooked on the story, and I just had to find out what happened to Kagome when she sneezed. It was awesome finding her back in time in Sesshoumaru's castle. Poor Sesshy, I would feel the same way if I had to deal with crazed females. I like how the other Lords and Ladies reacted. Saiyako was a great character to dislike. She reminded me of someone I used to know. You did a great job in creating suitable off-springs for Kag/Sess. Of course my favorite "pup" was Shippo ^__^. But I have to agree with yasmin. I didn't like the curse. Not one bit, but it was still good. I still don't like it though. The ending was sad but. I was like, nooo, they should die. They are after all the main characters, but at least they were together at the end. But it was still sad. I hope you are able to come up with another amazing fanfic. I am now your loyal fan. Ciao Ryo
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_girl (N.L.G.) On: June 28, 2004 08:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, I must apologize. I have been neglecting this story, but I think the least I can do is leave you a review. It's sad to see your story end; however, it's good to see that all your characters are at rest. I hope you start a new story soon. This is the part where I'd tell you to update, but I think it's a little late for that, ne? Good job. ~Ciao, Dreaming_girl
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 (could of sworn i signed in!) On: June 28, 2004 06:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree with you that is a happy ending! and thanx for the explanation it made sense! umm i enjoyed reading this story! ok that was weird i just typed cant wait til next chapter but its the end...so sad...oh well i loved the story!!!
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Title: Crying
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2004 22:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ending was both sad and happy at the same time........I couldn't stop crying when Kagome died.......WHY?!?!?! It's not fair T-T, but the way it ended was heart-moving. I hope to read many more stories, hopefuling ending a bit less sadly, but just as wonderfully writen. Keep writing!! :3
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Reviewed By: rosie13 (not on) On: June 27, 2004 20:16 PDT
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::Bawling too hard to write a decent review, but is very sad that this is ended. Wishes could go on forever::
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 06:56 PDT
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i was a bit confused at that last part...can you explain it? but other than that it was a great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: June 21, 2004 13:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what!!!!!!!! noooooooooooooooo! i hate the change!! why does she have to die of a freakin curse , you betta kill that bitch who didi t . im so into this fic lol lord ! anywayz good story even though i didnt liekt he curse but oh well great writer . cant wait for the nect chappy ! bye
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: June 20, 2004 13:38 PDT
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Is this the END?! Oh no! It can't be! Don't do this! Are you saying that this is going to be a sad ending? Aw man... can you at least put a ray of hope at the end? Please?
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 (didnt sign in) On: May 27, 2004 19:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* they're havin fun arent they? workin on the nect kid huh? at least i hope im right! tell me if im right!! awesome chapter cant wait til the next byez!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 20:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwww!!! How cute! I love this story! And aren't you just a clever little writer?? I did love the 1999 spring break/ tube top reference, and all of the other clever little references! So fun, haha. So how's that working out for you? (pause) Being clever? Sorry, had to work in a line from Fight Club there.Anywho- Keep up the good work- I'll be reading future chapters! woohoo
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 14:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww...for the last part. update again soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Shirohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 14:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter, but I have one lil' question for ya flam. If Kagome goes back to the western lands with Sessh then won't saiyako know that she's alive? Please update soon!!
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