| "There I Was" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: March 08, 2004 06:54 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
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aww! How cute! About 3 typos but I got the picture. That is so cute about Inuyasha helping! I hate Kikyou too, but the way you made her look nice! Very good!
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Reviewed By: paige89 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 21:52 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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well i wanted a girl, but then i think of a kid named Jordan....he's soooooo cute, and i do believe i can except his manlyness ^_^ well keep updating, i cant wait for whatever happens next!
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Reviewed By: rosie13 (not on) On: March 07, 2004 18:20 PST
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ooh, another chapter in the same day! YES!! A filler, but still. I like i like! But theres one thing... WHENRE WE GONNA SEE SESSY AGAIN????? I miss him in this tory, he needs to be there! Oh.... how much you wanna bet when Kagome sneezed, she made Sess disappear, or something? And while hes gone, whos controlling the government back there? And wouldnt Inuyasha have tld the ladies taht were there when he went to see if Sesshoumaru is back?
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 16:49 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, I love your story. There were a couple grammatical errors though. I don't usually pay attention to that stuff but it got a little confusing. Where's Sesshoumaru? I miss him! Lolz, anyways great chapter. You're getting a little slow on the updating though, so update soon! ~Ciao, Dreaming_girl
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Title: im really 'Paige89'
Reviewed By: woopy212 On: March 07, 2004 14:20 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yay! im lovin where its goin! i dont really like children(as in the girl gettin pregnant) because i think it takes away from the 'exciting romance', but i think you have put it together well; and, for some reason, i cant wait to see what the baby looks like!!!^_^ PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make it a girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!=^_^=
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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 19:57 PST
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YAY!! YOU UPDATED!!! WHOOOOHOOOO! *does a little dance around the computer and starts to chant* update update update update! yay!!! -^-^- i feel so happy...please update again soon. like..every other day...or something along those lines. But please update really soon and help kagome find sesshy soon. dammit...i had the pokers all ready in the fireplace too...neh. kirara's a girl. in the manga, when we first meet sango and she goes to greet kirara she says "hi kirara. have you been a good girl while i was gone" and they refer to kirara as a girl in the anime both japanese and english. yay!! you mentioned me in your story! that's the first time someone's done that *grows wings* neh ja ne!! *flies away*
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 19:16 PST
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Kirara is a girl..... At least in the American version..... Both Sango and Kagome refer to Kirara as "she" or "her".
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 13:26 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU UPDATED! *Dances around room* Yay! *Starts speech* "My fellow Americans...this is the happiest day of my life..." (Yes, it has been long since you last updated) But Great chapters to follow. I miss Sesshoumaru! He's in pain, she's in pain, we're all in pain. Please make the suspense stop! Anyways update soon. ~Ciao, Dreaming_girl
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: February 08, 2004 13:10 PST
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So Kagome Can control her powers now? Cool! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: February 07, 2004 13:17 PST
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YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED IN ALMOST A MONTH!!! WHY!? UPDATE PLEASE!
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Title: GYAH!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 19:12 PST
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NO NO NO NO NO NO....NO NO NO...NOOO...NO...no...Kagome's not dead, can't ya see Sesshy? Wouldn't Sesshy be able to sniff out Kagome since she's in the western lands now? And she coulnd't have gone to the other Lady's of other lands to tell them she was alright in case Sesshy comes back huh...*sigh*
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Reviewed By: Suhm Per Sahn On: January 15, 2004 18:32 PST
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i dont think it would turn out like that.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: January 11, 2004 13:09 PST
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NOOOOOOO! DON'T GIVE UP SESSOMARU!!! SHE'S NOT DEAD! SHE'S NOT! *bursts into tears* SHE'S ALIVE I TELL U!!! NOOOOOOO!
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 12:32 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it's good to know that I don't bug you. This chapter is so sad. Sesshoumaru thinks Kagome is dead. He's in agony can't you see? It's sad but good. I wonder what his reaction will be when he see's that Kagome isn't dead. Will he see? Or will you keep them as lovers from a distance? Oh, there are so many things that you can do in this story that it's driving me insane! That poor girl. Well at least Sessohumaru gave her(whom he thought was Kagome) a proper burial. Well until the next chapter. ~Ciao
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: January 11, 2004 07:04 PST
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NO!!!! You have to make him find Kagome! This is totally unfair to Fluffy!
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