| "For The Love of An Enemy" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kilea On: October 20, 2003 19:48 CDT
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-sighs dreamily- i am so luving this fic.
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Title: magic does not exist... at least with disappearing errors...
Reviewed By: Nankinmai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 19:24 CDT
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first of all: Toukijin, Tetsusaiga, Tenseiga... [ha, spotted them! took notes while i read them... =P] | next in 2nd paragraph: "His attack had been rebuked as if her were nothing more than a slight annoyance." | then in 3rd paragraph: "and then felt cool steal in his empty hand." | lastly... KAWAII!!! can't believe kagome said that in the end! =D
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Reviewed By: sesshousbabe13 On: October 20, 2003 19:17 CDT
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that was awesome!!!!!!thats not the end is it!!!hope not!!!
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Reviewed By: LadySesshomaru (aka: angelypoo) On: October 20, 2003 18:32 CDT
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I absolutly love it!! Man, you are a wonderful writer!! I was reading it in my English class, and my teacher was like, "What are you reading?" So I told her, and she wanted to read it herself!! Lol She emailed me and told me that she loved it!!
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Reviewed By: Kilea On: October 20, 2003 17:10 CDT
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*yoda voice* ah. and a jedi she shall become. lol. srry couldnt resist. very good so far! ^=^
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Reviewed By: angelypoo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 14:56 CDT
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LOL! I'm sure there is more to your story!! I just can't wait to read more of it!!
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Reviewed By: Nankinmai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 11:17 CDT
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i think i'm going nuts... i KNOW i spotted one in this latest chapter, 12 i think, but how is it possible that i couldn't find it again the second time around! grrr!!! >=(
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Reviewed By: RED DAY On: October 20, 2003 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice... Now it's time for pain, Naraku is such an a$$! Anything should go here in this fight!!!
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Reviewed By: Snow Godess_Me On: October 20, 2003 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, I like a kagome that can kick butt!! Keep it up. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sweetapple [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic so far! Wow you update fast! Anyway if u have the time you can read my fanfic. It's my first so I want some opinion on that. This fic is great so far with the Sess/Kag moments and all.
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Reviewed By: RED DAY On: October 19, 2003 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so breath taking. Update Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Kilea859 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 17:06 CDT
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ooo...he's ~e~v~i~l. this is a great fic so far and i cant wait to see how it will turn out. ^^ plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: angelypoo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story...is there anymore to it? If not, please write more!!
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Reviewed By: Nankinmai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 22:24 CDT
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i can prove the grammar part... i could have sworn that i spotted one in this chapter, but i couldn't find it the second time around... =\
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Reviewed By: NightChild01 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep, Favorites list. Very good chapter...Naraku's like a cockroach--hard to kill--ne? ~NC01
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