| "Promises" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
| Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] |
Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 23:11 CST
Comment/Review:
The poem wasnt too bad, and the story (what I can remember of it) is going good. This is probably a long shot, but I bet that sesshomarou is going to try to give the jewel back to inuyasha either for christmas, or as a way to get him to forgive him. Kagome will somehow find out about this, either by being there or by some other way and either try to get it back, or try to get closer to inuyasha. that is basically my guess, not too complicated. until next we meet...have fun and be at peace.
|
Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! update soon!!! ^_^
|
Reviewed By: Shippo Gene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh oh! please update soon! i wanna know what happens! oh...and thanks for not leaving it off as a cliffy. that was pretty nice of you.
|
Reviewed By: Shippo Gene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no! it's naraku! not him! lol. i love all your little author notes, they're totally kawaii! they keep me amused too. good job!
|
Title: ummmm
Reviewed By: rachelOH On: December 28, 2003 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah no prob it is the holiday season but pretty good story so far
|
Reviewed By: Shippo Gene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waaaa! yasha's dead so soon! and only the first chapter! oh well, i know he won't really be dead...that would kinda defeat the purpose. anyways...that whole princess/prince thing was way cute!
|
Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic!:D
|
Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic!:D
|
Reviewed By: IWantMoreIY On: December 10, 2003 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a shame these stupid scales only go up to 10 of 10. You've earned at least 15 of 10 in all catagories. Remember, you can't please everyone all the time, but you can make the vast majority of us (readers) ABSOLUTELY SUPERHAPPY (I know it's not really a word) simply by writing more to this wonderful story! *inserts swirly hypnotic thingy here* You will write more...you will write more...you will write more...
|
Reviewed By: Kym On: December 07, 2003 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great story!! I cant wait for Kagome to find out that InuYasha was that little boy! I hate hospitals ~*shivers*~
|
Reviewed By: hanna On: December 07, 2003 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue!
|
Reviewed By: dawg_demon On: December 07, 2003 06:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was kinda queer...yep queer
|
Reviewed By: dawg_demon On: December 07, 2003 06:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
um.... it was ok.... ive seen better
|
Reviewed By: Desert Flower On: December 06, 2003 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If i could rate the overall rating (1-10 10=best) i would rate it 1,000,000,000,000,000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =P
|
Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This may not be the best story that i have ever read, but the idea behind it is deffinitely original. The best things about your story are the detail, and the storyline. I hope that you will be able to update soon
|
| Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] |
