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Reviewed By: Kensh1n81 On: February 18, 2004 04:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall i think it was a good fic, but i really think you should have Inu and Sess, talk their things out...i mean...its not to often Sess is reasonable in any fic..heh...but i think i would make the story a lil less fake..i mean im sure Inu's ans Sess' mom would like to see Sess again...atleast thats wat i think. Anyways, Nice story.
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 01:41 CST
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and so it comes to an end like everything must. good chap, and it makes a fairly complete feeling, but i have one suggestion. try to show where inuyasha and kagome are standing and looking in the last part. although it is a good ending the way it is, i think it might be just a bit better if they were 'staring into each other's eyes in such a way that made it seem as though their souls were twining around one another', or something like that. I thank the for this most excellent finish, i can barely remember what happens in half of this fic, but i get this faint sense of a complete story. an epilogue should only be added if you believe it a necessary addition to this fic. hope you have fun and congrats on the completion of this fic.
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Title: aw!!!
Reviewed By: Shippo Gene [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw! how fluffy! I loved it! it was a good ending. that whole twist with Sesshy getting the jewel was really good thinking. great job! i loved it!
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Reviewed By: Setsuna-chan On: February 15, 2004 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so I finished reading it and it was AMAZING!!!
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww i loved that ending!!! That was so sweet!!!! ^_^ Your story was really good! I hope you write more storys soon!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 11:44 CST
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Great story! I loved it! Bravo! *claps loudly*
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Reviewed By: Setsuna-chan On: February 14, 2004 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness I've only read the first two chapters and I'm crying there are tears literally running down my cheeks. It takes a talented writer to make someone cry like that.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha nsi On: February 14, 2004 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u are really too cruel for your own good. i love this fic it is really emotional. i don't understand how kagome can be so strong, but that is her character, so update
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 05:24 CST
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personally i think that there is more drama than sap in this chap since there is more thinking going on...i think. eh, howevery you wish to look at it, i believe its a good chapter, although i feel very sorry that kagome was mistaken, and that i happened to be wrong in my guess...but oh well.If you do update on valentines, then i'm sure that i could give you the invisible trophy for one of the fastest updates ever. have fun and good luck with the rest.
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Reviewed By: Dragonstar03 On: January 24, 2004 01:36 CST
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update soon
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Title: PLZPLZPLZ!
Reviewed By: Chib On: January 17, 2004 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This is ChiB once again! (everyone miss moi?!(A)) hehehe.. anywayz.. SO! when are ya gonna update?! :D cuz i can HARDLY and i mean HARDLY waIT!!!!!! :D:D like i soooo wanan read wutz gonna happen next! YiPPY! so so ! ppl PLZPLZ review this lovely author's WONDERFUL 100% beautiful stori! Alrighty?! now i g2g wel.. so ppl review and plzplz dearest aurthor.. update! ;) ^-^ JA-NAE MINA-SAN!(EVERYONE) -loves ur stori like hell! :P-
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Title: great story!!!!
Reviewed By: chib On: January 11, 2004 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOWY! great story!!!! omg i loved it like hell!!!!!(heaven:P) it was soo sad, and i want to see sad(inu/kag) more! hehe i like to cry a bit.. well plz dont make anyone die or ne thing, and plz update sooner cuz im dyin to read MORE!:D it rocks uh huh~!~! and um..i want inu and kag scenes more (hehe..plz?) and i think they should get along together! :D plz plz update!! *luved ur story (again)!*ja~(bye)
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Reviewed By: TXKitty On: January 10, 2004 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story was great, so please, please, please update soon. i can't wait to find out what happens oh ya, thanx for not leaving the story as a cliffy
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 23:11 CST
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The poem wasnt too bad, and the story (what I can remember of it) is going good. This is probably a long shot, but I bet that sesshomarou is going to try to give the jewel back to inuyasha either for christmas, or as a way to get him to forgive him. Kagome will somehow find out about this, either by being there or by some other way and either try to get it back, or try to get closer to inuyasha. that is basically my guess, not too complicated. until next we meet...have fun and be at peace.
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! update soon!!! ^_^
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