| "Have a Horney Halloween" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: ME On: October 17, 2003 02:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for the 'treat' ^_~ mmmmm...enjoyed it VERY much---always had a fondness for the 'tartiness' of lemon. Now, to go make my own lemonade..........
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Reviewed By: Paragorgon (not logged in) On: October 16, 2003 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsome! i was confused about why he would have fangs if he was human, but i got it now. is all your writing this good? i hope it is. great job! watch the spelling/grammer.
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Reviewed By: Relix On: October 16, 2003 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grammar errors... but so what?! This was F*****g awesome! Really original, funny, cool and sexy.. WRITE MORE LIKE THIS!! PLEASE, I HAVE SUCH A HARD ON NOW... I GOTTA FIND RELIEF... :) YOU'RE REALLY AWESOME!!
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe! very good! lol, ya.....*sigh* hehe, ne way, i really liked this fic, it was very well thought out! yup! the hair dye n contact lenses...ya....i thot it was the new moon but then u sed no demon powers, so im glad you cleared that up! hehe! n wow! *drools* i like the way inuyasha thinks about ppunishment...hehehe! *grins evilly* ahem.....ne way, good job, n i'll be sure to send it to my fren hu WILL have a VERY horny and happy halloween! lol, good job! Ai-Lani
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Title: Horny Little Devil
Reviewed By: mzfluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great little fic. What fun!! It was OOC for my taste but in the end K/I got their groove on and thats all that really matters. Happy Halloween to all!
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