| "Have a Horney Halloween" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: CrazyDevil100 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was really good.You gave me a surprise when it was InuYasha!... ._. I thought the guys was Naraku...*shiver*but it was INUYASHA!YAY!Congrats for your story!!
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Reviewed By: Nassau On: May 13, 2004 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only reason you get a seven for overall is because of the poor spelling and grammar. It breaks the reader out of the vision, the continuity. Hot sex though, and great outfits. ^_______^
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Reviewed By: SummerRain On: March 20, 2004 09:27 CST
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That was hot! Please continue to write lemons!
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Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great loved reading this story. Its one of my favs.
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Title: hellova story
Reviewed By: babiegurl On: December 31, 2003 00:56 CST
Comment/Review:
you should write another about what happened w/the rest of the crew!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man that was..... H-O-T-!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS KICKED ASS!!!!!!!! omg! i got so fuckin wet reading this shit! where did you learn to write sex sence like that!!!! lol. keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagney On: November 14, 2003 09:52 CST
Comment/Review:
This was a really good fic. Please write more or update this one. Maybe this time have a Thanksgiving, Christmas or something.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: tk On: November 12, 2003 20:10 CST
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WOW that was one of the best fics i loved it espesially sence Inu-Yasha hates KIkio (dont care if i spelled that right or not) kool fic keep writing
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Title: you rock
Reviewed By: darkangelkitty On: October 26, 2003 09:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats was almost the best fic i have ever read it was great, i loved the way kagome told of kikyo my fav part i hate kikyo , anyway i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!! please write more like this
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Reviewed By: ME On: October 17, 2003 02:24 CDT
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Thanks for the 'treat' ^_~ mmmmm...enjoyed it VERY much---always had a fondness for the 'tartiness' of lemon. Now, to go make my own lemonade..........
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Reviewed By: Paragorgon (not logged in) On: October 16, 2003 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsome! i was confused about why he would have fangs if he was human, but i got it now. is all your writing this good? i hope it is. great job! watch the spelling/grammer.
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Reviewed By: Relix On: October 16, 2003 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grammar errors... but so what?! This was F*****g awesome! Really original, funny, cool and sexy.. WRITE MORE LIKE THIS!! PLEASE, I HAVE SUCH A HARD ON NOW... I GOTTA FIND RELIEF... :) YOU'RE REALLY AWESOME!!
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe! very good! lol, ya.....*sigh* hehe, ne way, i really liked this fic, it was very well thought out! yup! the hair dye n contact lenses...ya....i thot it was the new moon but then u sed no demon powers, so im glad you cleared that up! hehe! n wow! *drools* i like the way inuyasha thinks about ppunishment...hehehe! *grins evilly* ahem.....ne way, good job, n i'll be sure to send it to my fren hu WILL have a VERY horny and happy halloween! lol, good job! Ai-Lani
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Title: Horny Little Devil
Reviewed By: mzfluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great little fic. What fun!! It was OOC for my taste but in the end K/I got their groove on and thats all that really matters. Happy Halloween to all!
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