| "The New Arrival" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: sailor_jupiter22 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. keep up the good writing.
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Title: The New Arrival
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Now
Reviewed By: Marie J.W. On: November 13, 2004 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
You say "now" too much and "newly wed" too much. It detracts from the story and dialoge.
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 19:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks!! Finished finally!!! TTFN~ Ta Ta For Now
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Reviewed By: Boggards_babe11 On: January 21, 2004 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great write a sequal please
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Title: Write a Sequel
Reviewed By: Small Lady Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it's Chibiusa. I really think you should write that sequel. I realy like New Arrival and I want to see a sequel. You're a fanfic writer.
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Title: Write a Sequel
Reviewed By: Chibiusa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 07:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really think you should write that sequel. I realy like New Arrival and I want to see a sequel. You're a fanfic writer.
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Title: Write a Sequel
Reviewed By: Chibiusa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 07:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really think you should write that sequel. I realy like New Arrival and I want to see a sequel. You're a fanfic writer.
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Title: update soon!
Reviewed By: sailorjupiter1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, I read chapters 1 through 6 straight just a second ago. Please update soon and I hope you don't have anything bad happen to Usagi ^_^ Great work on it keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 16:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks you guys!! Keep those reivews coming and sorry that I haven't updated in awhile this chapter is really long so I'm typing as fast as I can!!! Peace and love!!!
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Reviewed By: SuzyQ On: November 18, 2003 02:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: SuzyQ On: November 09, 2003 03:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your stories. Please write so more chapters. I really loved, ok? My email is: SuzanneBshll@aol.com
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Title: Keep ya Head Up (UUU CHILD THINGS ARE GONNA GET EASIER)
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl, I already read your story, b/c you sent it to me of course. :) I like your story gurl so you'd betta update gurl. (Ok i'll stop speaking ebonics) but you better update soon and stop sending me the same chapters, it's just not right. :( And you'd better read my second story and reviw it too. And that girl you told me about who gave you a bad review. FOREGET HER SHE'S JUST A STUPID, STUPID BITCHHHHHHHHHH!! DON'T LET ANYONE MAKE YOU FEEL BAD ABOUT YOUR STORIES. AS LONG AS YOU KNOW YOU'RE GOOD, THEN YOU'LL ALRIGHT. Cheer up, ok. Ja ne!!!!!!!!!! And keep up the good work!!!!!! :)
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Title: Keep ya Head Up (UUU CHILD THINGS ARE GONNA GET EASIER)
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl, I already read your story, b/c you sent it to me of course. :) I like your story gurl so you'd betta update gurl. (Ok i'll stop speaking ebonics) but you better update soon and stop sending me the same chapters, it's just not right. :( And you'd better read my second story and reviw it too. And that girl you told me about who gave you a bad review. FOREGET HER SHE'S JUST A STUPID, STUPID BITCHHHHHHHHHH!! DON'T LET ANYONE MAKE YOU FEEL BAD ABOUT YOUR STORIES. AS LONG AS YOU KNOW YOU'RE GOOD, THEN YOU'LL ALRIGHT. Cheer up, ok. Ja ne!!!!!!!!!! And keep up the good work!!!!!! :)
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Title: great chapter inumoon3
Reviewed By: SamllLadySerenity On: November 02, 2003 12:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this chapter alot. I can't wait to read the next chapter. You should do a sequel to this fanfic. Just to let you know on MM.org I'm Chibiusa.
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