| "The New Arrival" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: sailor_jupiter22 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. keep up the good writing.
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Title: The New Arrival
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Now
Reviewed By: Marie J.W. On: November 13, 2004 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
You say "now" too much and "newly wed" too much. It detracts from the story and dialoge.
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 19:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks!! Finished finally!!! TTFN~ Ta Ta For Now
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Reviewed By: Boggards_babe11 On: January 21, 2004 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great write a sequal please
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Title: Write a Sequel
Reviewed By: Small Lady Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it's Chibiusa. I really think you should write that sequel. I realy like New Arrival and I want to see a sequel. You're a fanfic writer.
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Title: Write a Sequel
Reviewed By: Chibiusa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 07:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really think you should write that sequel. I realy like New Arrival and I want to see a sequel. You're a fanfic writer.
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Title: Write a Sequel
Reviewed By: Chibiusa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 07:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really think you should write that sequel. I realy like New Arrival and I want to see a sequel. You're a fanfic writer.
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Title: update soon!
Reviewed By: sailorjupiter1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, I read chapters 1 through 6 straight just a second ago. Please update soon and I hope you don't have anything bad happen to Usagi ^_^ Great work on it keep up the good work!
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