| "Of Youkai Bondage" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: me On: October 20, 2003 07:38 CDT
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it's too bad the story was so short but it was good!
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Reviewed By: Missteya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 19:52 CDT
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Title: Ending....
Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great ending, but I think most of us would like to see more into Inuyasha and Kagome's future, may I suggest a Sequal? I mean they could all be living peacefully on an Island, when all the sudden Kikyo appears to tell Kagome that something happened at their home and that she needs to come immediatly or something like that. Well that's my suggestion! You can e-mail me about it; wingeddreamer1@hotmail.com Ja! §ºVagabondº§
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Reviewed By: Missteya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 08:23 CDT
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i don't like this system
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Reviewed By: Ruki, The Being of Darkness On: October 19, 2003 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!! I absolutly LOVED your story!!! The style, creativity, I loved it all!! One of the best fanfics I've ever read!! I await to see your next piece of work!! :D
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Reviewed By: Ruki, The Being of Darkness On: October 19, 2003 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!! I absolutly LOVED your story!!! The style, creativity, I loved it all!! One of the best fanfics I've ever read!! I await to see your next piece of work!! :D
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Reviewed By: Missteya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 20:04 CDT
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Reviewed By: Irene On: October 18, 2003 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!Wonderful and never would have thought of it myself so that means it definately deserves a ten(not that I would ever think up anything anywhere near as good^_^;;) All muses:"Wuss!Non-creative, really big wuss!" Me:"hehe...um...sorry guys." Anyways,great fic. Um...kinda left hanging at the end but that's probably just me~.~(*mutters*)never could tell which started near and which ended...*weakly* somewhere...else...now I'm really confuzzled..Is that right? I dunno. Oh,well..great fic...*wanders off aimlessly*...^_^;
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Reviewed By: Missteya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 15:00 CDT
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 11:55 CDT
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OK, when I saw that you had another new chapter out I was happy. But when I could only get to chapter 7 I was annoyed. Then I finally got to chappy 8, I saw chappy 9 and thought, "This is cool." Then when I started reading chappy 9 I noticed chappy 10, I kept on thinkng, "This gets better and better." I saw all the rest of them and I'm happy you updated as soon as you could. But that still doesn't mean I shouldn't say, "UPDATE NOW OR DIE!!!!!!!!" ... OK, maybe that was a little extreeme, but I still want you to update.
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Reviewed By: Missteya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 08:06 CDT
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I have to post to check
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 01:53 CDT
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Wonder how Kagome is going to pull this one off. And like Kagome I want to knock InuYasha for his insensitive statement but he made up for it. And I can't believe that he said that about Kagome out loud. Ayame has been through so much. Makes me sad even thinking about it. And I believed the part where you said Kagome hadn't seen InuYasha when Kikyo bought him the first time. What I said was when did she buy him. Because if I was their grandfather, I be damn if I pay for the same slave twice. ('scuse the lingo. It didn't sound right any other way.) And she did all those horrid things in just a week! Sick and twisted. Thanks for the quick update.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: sabriel77 On: October 18, 2003 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the whole damn thing! It is SOOO cool! Update soon, please! (%$^@!!##*!! you Kikyo! I hate Kikyo in this fic!) Lol, but PLEASE keep writin. :)
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Reviewed By: Missteya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 00:34 CDT
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just checking
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 23:12 CDT
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I just spent the last couple of hours reading fromv the beginging to Ch 9, and all I can think is 'Wow.' This story is sad but at the same time it has happy moments which seem to overshadow the bad ones. (Well maybe not completely. But that is why I like it.) Your writing stlye is much different from what I'm used to reading and I love it! Now to comment on the story. Kagome is going to kill Kikyo when she finds out what she did to Ayame. (Who owns her anyway?) And it will tear her up when Ayame tells her the whole story. Wonder what Kikyo really makes them do? Small cuts. Does she get "off" on others pain? Hmm. Dumb question. But is that painful foreplay going to mess up performance? (Don't mind me I have an over active imagination.) I thought the InuYasha-Kagome moment was so sweet. I think it was a very mature sacrifice (it that spelled right?) on her part to want to sell him so not to take advantage of him. But did she honestly think it would be better for him? If he had been returned five times and about to be 'destoryed' who would want to buy him? He'd end back up where he started. I am still curious about when Kikyo bought him. I can understand Kagome not seeing him if Koga is just leaving the room after three weeks but still...sounds fishy to me. I'm still waiting for the protection part to come in. You wouldn't have wrote it if it wasn't important. Darn. I wrote to much again. Sorry I tend to get wrapped up in my own musing and so how it appears on the screen. Be looking for your next chapter.
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