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| "Winter Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] | | Pages (13): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 › » ] | Reviewed By: bghztr On: July 10, 2011 02:18 EDT
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lol this is the most weird story. And the characters are OOC. | Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: inuyashaz_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 10:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story . i printed it off a couple months ago and i have keep it like a sacred bible. i finaly got time to review. I was wondering if u would review my story at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4176317/1/undecided_title
| Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story! Liked it!
| Title: yays!!
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 06:22 EST
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very good... this story was soooo great i stayed up all night reading the whole thing through!! woohooo... you should really make a second part to this story.. because you ended it in a way that leaves it open and people wanting to know more!!! wooo.. loved it .. justw anted to let you know ^_^ ~Ja Ne ~ Mysterious_Tears
| Title: Winter Hearts
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 02:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
| Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 13:07 EST
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You actually caused me to not wanna kill kikyo! You did good! real good i thank you very much for a wonderful story. PLease come review in Cuz It Is. I really need a Beta though so um tell me what u think okay? Happy Holidays!
| Reviewed By: WhiteRose-Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 12:40 EST
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I really enjoyed this fic cuz it wasn't what I'd expected. It was full of action, lust and heartache and i think that you're the first author to make me cry when I read the part about Sess breaking Kagome's heart and then try to reach out to her for forgiveness. Keep up the good work :P
| Reviewed By: Bambigirl On: September 30, 2005 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ohhh you've written such a good story!! All the other Kag/Sess fanfics are with them falling in love too soon or him being nice all of a sudden all that crap!! Thank you for not wasting 2 hours of my life!! I am indebted to you...so I will see you laters!
| Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 09, 2005 03:43 EDT
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hi, me again. I have a few questions. 1; what happened to the well. 2; where is Kouga. Really, could you email me and tell me whatès going on.
| Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 08, 2005 13:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just...don't get it. There's nothing wrong with the style. I'm not flaming, so please don't take this as a flame. It is well writen, but the plot just doesn't catch me. You kill off Inuyasha, which is overdone, not to mention that if he can be hit by the Wind Scar and having his stomach punch through and live, I doubt he'll die s easily. I understand he was human, but that seems like a last-second detail thrown in to make the death plausible. Also, you don't mention how Sango and Miroku get killed, an odd plothole. Next, the actual story. Why does Kagome love Sess? He raped her, seduced her, demeaned her, made her a slave, beat her, and yet she loves him?!? Where's the well in this story? Also, she turns away from Inuyasha, who loves her back, but oops, too bad Inu! She's in love with a rapist now. Then, he mates Kikyo, and Kagome gets mad? Inu should be the one who's pissed! Oh, and I read about how she forgives Sess because he was willing to die for her. Um, hello Kags! Sess was willing to die, whereas Inu actually did it! I just don't understand how Kagome can think Sess redeams all of his misdeeds with one little act of bravery. Sess kept fighting? Well yeah, he was kinda full-youkai! And Inu was only human, I'm sure is he could have kept fighting, he would have! I just don't understand how Kagome can go from loving a hanyou who died for her to loving a rapist youkai who was willing to. email me at aculp_2@hotmail.com if you want to talk more. maybe you could explain it | Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 07, 2005 15:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just...don't get it. There's nothing wrong with the style. I'm not flaming, so please don't take this as a flame. It is well writen, but the plot just doesn't catch me. You kill off Inuyasha, which is overdone, not to mention that if he can be hit by the Wind Scar and having his stomach punch through and live, I doubt he'll die s easily. I understand he was human, but that seems like a last-second detail thrown in to make the death plausible. Also, you don't mention how Sango and Miroku get killed, an odd plothole. Next, the actual story. Why does Kagome love Sess? He raped her, seduced her, demeaned her, made her a slave, beat her, and yet she loves him?!? WTF?!?!? That just doesn't get me. Also, she turns away from Inuyasha, who loves her back, but oops, too bad Inu! She's in love with a rapist now. Then, he mates Kikyo, and Kagome gets mad? Inu should be the one who's pissed! Oh, and I read about how she forgives Sess because he was willing to die for her. Um, hello Kags! Sess was willing to die, whereas Inu actually did it! I just don't understand how Kagome can think Sess redeams all of his misdeeds with one little act of bravery. Sess kept fighting? Well yeah, he was kinda full-youkai! And Inu was only human, I'm sure is he could have kept fighting, he would have! I just don't understand how Kagome can go from loving a hanyou who died for her to loving a rapist youkai who was willing to. email me at aculp_2@hotmail.com if you want to talk more. maybe you could explain | Reviewed By: inuyashaz_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 10:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it ^_^
| Reviewed By: Inu luvr14 On: June 20, 2005 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! I love your fanfic. It made me laugh and cry and go through many emothions. Ever think about doing a sequa?
| Title: Winter Hearts
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 18:10 EST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
| Reviewed By: Makai's Queen On: February 25, 2005 17:29 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked this story. pure emotion. really good. ^_^ you know, amyfishigiyugi (probably spelt it wrong) really gets around!! i've read her stuff, seen stuff edited by her and joint projects!! she is one popular author. a really good one at that!! so, if you and her are writing one together, it's gotta be really good!! bye!!! kisskiss MQ
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