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Title: Wow! Excellent
Reviewed By: MKyrissaean [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredible story! So well written, and captivating.. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 21:11 CST
Comment/Review:
You have written a very touching story - I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: eh.....
Reviewed By: toku-chan/tOkU-cHaN On: November 17, 2003 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t! ^_^ this whole fic is so angsty, I want to cry... ;_; I really enjoyed tghis chapter, Inuyasha gaining Mrs. Higurashi's approval and all... ^.~ He seems a bit out of character, but a year like what he had can change someone... ;_; poor him.... anyway, I look forward to your next update! ^^
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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 13:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy to see an update, though it ended as a little cliffhanger so to speak. I know it was a good place to end that chapter and all, lol, but when I got to the end I was like "no! I want to read what happens when they see each other finally!" lol. Oh well, I will have to be patient...again. Still an excellent chapter and nicely handled with the talk between Inuyasha and Kagome's mother. All aspects of a good fic here, it's one of my most favorites. Oh, and thanks for the clarification in that author note at the end there, I was a bit curious about that (and I admit I was touched that you had taken the time to address it) Very kind of you. Well, thank you for the new chapter, and I will be looking forward to reading the next (hoping that it will be the reunion ;) ) Keep up the wonderful job! Best Wishes
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice...I hope you post the next chapter soon
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Reviewed By: therhoda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked you weaving of the fact that neither considered the other before they said or did something. I also like you voice in the fates! I am waiting fort he next chapter and Hoep you and your muse are well.
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: November 12, 2003 01:21 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW! I really like it. More please? ^.~
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: tOkU-cHaN [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg... This is so beautiful.. I'm supposed to be doing laundry and studying now, but I was so caught up in your fic! I really love this... I have to look for you on ff.net.. I usually don't spend time here... ^_^;; I was recommended by someone, and I love them for it...! In some places though, some '!' should've been '?', but that's about it! ^_^ I really enjoy this, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 09:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was nice to have a chapter on Kagome's POV, while I don't necessarily think that she had come across as less upset about the seperation in earlier chapters as you alluded to in your author's note, still to have this recent chapter involving her is great. You really have an excellent way of getting emotions across and keeping one's attention. Thanks for the update and looking forward to the next! Best Wishes!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 09, 2003 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sniff. Still very sad. Looking more hopefull though. Love the story!! Thanks for writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!!! thanks so much for thanking me! *wipes tear* i love being thanksed! really-every chapter? hmm....sweet! hehe, i just LOVE this story, so i must review review review!!!!! i know what ya mean...it is easier to get into Yash's head huh? oooh! i hope they pass their tests!!! eep! it would be terrible if they didnt! wow-Yash sure did rub off on KAgome ne? hehe-that was a GREAT chapter! i REALLY cant wait for the next one and i hope everything is going okay with you! i'll be waiting oh great writer of this wonderful story! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Priestess Miaka On: November 08, 2003 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Thank You
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
such sad sweet words are refreshing to read, in a world full of stories of the flesh...please oh please update soon.
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Title: lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee!!! WOW! very good! i would have cried, but i used my tears at drama today...but it did twist my hear! This was VERY good! i really like this fic, its very deep! i hope u update soon, but just take your time okay! keep up the good work! much luv -Lani
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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 09:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was incredible, you have such a wonderful way of describing emotions and such, I love it! It was so easy to feel what Inuyasha was feeling. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work! Best Wishes
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