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Reviewed By: Droom On: July 23, 2004 09:22 CDT
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There! I finished reading it! And was also very happy to learn we're only half way through the story concept now, it's great. Very different from the Arrangement, but I love it still. "On one side of the cirque, Chang and Duo were facing off - well, the Dragon was facing off, Duo was leaning with insulting casualness against a stone, laughing in his face." This bit had me grinning like a maniac, probably because I could visualise it perfectly. :) Very interesting and wicked cool story you've come up with. ^^
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@pacbell.net On: July 05, 2004 01:25 CDT
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Another fascinating chapter. I love the byplay between Wufei and Duo... and the bittersweetness of that between Trowa and Quatre. I adored Zero panicing about the end of the universe in a mere many billion years. I can't tell you how delighted I am that this fic is only half way done! I look forward to the rest.
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Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: July 04, 2004 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never tell a lie? I don't think it is wise! Hey, you'd got us to fell in love with a liar Duo, and now no more lies? Injustice!!!! But can you make him manipulative without telling a lie at least? Is "Maxwell" really in Jushin's vocabulary? I keep thinking the coffee when you say "House Maxwell". Isn't Heero 'the Source of all thing'? Please update soon. It is such a joy reading your fic.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 13:25 CDT
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Ya know I was afraid this was the end!! But I'm SOOO happy it isn't. *notices a plot bunny bouncing by* it's pink?! *grabs it and spray paints it blue* much better (^_^) I think the progress of the story is going very well and I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: June 20, 2004 18:02 CDT
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The pace is great, although you could move a bit faster with the plot, as long as you don't skimp over the Duo and Wufie part. The plot, so far is clear enough, we know more about Duo and Wufei, but it wouldn't hurt to start seeing some insight into Heero. After all a 5x2x1 fic would not be complete if we can't see some kind of interest on Heero's behalf. Keep up the AWESOME job and update soon.
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Title: Perfect fic!
Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: June 20, 2004 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am so glad that it is only half way through, this fic is so good that I don't want it to end, ever. I won't mind if you post at least one chapter a day. After a few intense chapters, I am glad you are going to slow things down a little. Don't forget to heat up the love scenes though. I wonder how the experience changed Heero, will he emerge smarter and better in courting Duo? By the way, if someone has sex with Duo, will he be having it with the entire Jishin race too since all of them are now inside Duo? Imagine millions of Jishins having an orgasm at the same time! ;D Well, if the dead ones could not feel it, than there are at least a few millions of Peeping Toms inside Duo head. It has been a long time since you throw us a lemon or lime, write on!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually the pace is perfect...in fact you can go faster if ya want to. I love your writings this and "The Arrangement" are my favorites but I pretty much love whatever you put out there. Keep up the good work. TaTa
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Reviewed By: Cephalanthus [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 18:57 CDT
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Woo-hoo! Still reading, still enjoying... no suggestions for future development because I'm just having so darn much fun following where you lead. Keep up the amazing work!
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Title: Justice
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What needs more developing? Well, the 2x5, but that is hopefully to come. I would like to know whether or not Quatre is going to keep Zero or not. And who or what is Heero? The story isn't going neither to fast or to slow, it is just fine with me. Fast where fast is needed and slow when you need it slow. Poor Duo, having to deal with so many other souls in his mind. It is a miricale that he is acting sane for the most time. And now he has to face a really pissed of Wufei. And that after he protected Wufei from being taken over from Juusan.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 11:46 CDT
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*giggles about 2x5* well wuffers is being kind of mean... him calling Duo trash and all. but it would be interesting if somehow it worked out for them. but hey, the affection that Duo's showing to heero could that also lead to something? Ya!! jusan's onworld, and i'm anxious to see what happens now... I think that Duo and heero are now the only ones powerful enough to knock Juju off planet. can't wait!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@pacbell.net On: June 13, 2004 01:16 CDT
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I love all your fics but this one has a special place in my heart. It's so well plotted, you give all the clues and still keep me guessing. I adore the byplays between the characters and the AU abilities and roles you've assigned them. You've had me both laughing and crying... and always breathless for more.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a brilliant move! Duo had marked Wufei. Now, Juusan has arrived, what happens next?
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Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: May 30, 2004 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The long-waited big fight is very intense and wonderful. But I wonder why Duo didn't throw back the soul stone to Fen so that he could fight better.. nevertheless, I am very glad to see Duo handles the dragon himself. The imp's interruption is just hilarious, I like it a lot. Seems like Duo is losing to the Dragon, but he must have saved something up his sleeve, ne? Please update soon! You are GREAT!
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Reviewed By: StarStruck [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothing makes me happier than reading a new chapter of one of my favorite fanfics. ^________^
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Reviewed By: Turtle_Fire On: May 07, 2004 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Congratulation on another marvelous chapter! I love Duo's attitude, and Wufei's stubborness...I hope he will ruin the war for the Jusan. Please update ASAP, we are all dying to see your next chapter here!
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