| "The Source Of All Things" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Reviewed By: Turtle_Fire On: January 13, 2004 03:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like to me Duo had used Quatre to get zero. Great move! I always understand the Duo in here is not 'evil' in a bad sense; he just runs, hides, and most importantly ,lies, to achieve the greater good. Maybe I should not had used the word 'evil'; it should be reserved to describe Maldoror exclusively.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 05, 2004 17:38 EST
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Great fic. I like it. I have a few questions: 1. Would you explain Dou's behaviour towards Quatre? Was he actually reading Quatre's mind? 2. Who or what is Duo? 3. Was Wufei the last guy who Duo was dancing with or someone who looks like him? Keep it up and update soon
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Reviewed By: Turtle_fire On: January 05, 2004 02:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah! More info. on Duo! I like how your Duo turned out so far in this story, especially the evil and calculating bits. You must be so proud to have produced one of the most unique and intriguing OOC Duo.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 01:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Why did Duo do whatever he did to Quatre? What/Who is Duo?
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Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 03:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gee, you only write the unexpected. Who would have thought Duo not collecting his "thanks" after resurrected the dragon? I am anxiously waiting for the 'taming of the dragon' scene everyday here. Man, it is so agonizing!!! Garrr... *Turtlefire picks up a very sharp object and perpares to poke hard.*
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 17:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wai, this is so exciting. So is Duo also the last of some race?
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Title: Ah, happiness...
Reviewed By: Zefyr (not signed in) On: December 23, 2003 13:02 EST
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'Duo smiled like the cat that had broken through the perimeter fence, killed the guard dogs, beaten the security system and picked the lock to assassinate the canary.' ----> It's lines like these that make me set up a shrine in the corner and bow down to the Almighty Maldorer. Damn! And then there's the visual of the tsunami hesitating at the shore... you just have such a deft way of putting things. Never fails to leave me in awe - at the same time I'm laughing. ;D
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Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 02:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an exciting chapter! I just love the way you describe their fighting scene, I am still catching my breath here. Duo the cheerleader was just cute, you must award him a big fat Hee-lemon for his effort. I didn't expect to Duo saving the dragon at all, what a surprise! I am looking forward to see him playing with his new pet dragon. PLEASE update soon, you know we love you!!!!
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 02:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is excellent. The story is catching and the plot well thought through. But I wonder who or what Duo is.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: December 11, 2003 23:16 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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There was some intense fighting in this chapter. As for Wufei and Duo I can't wait to read what happens next between them. Keep up the great job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 17:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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NEAT! Heero has become one w/ Wing. Is Shenlong destroyed then? Does Duo intend to incorporate Wufei in to the group, if so how?
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Reviewed By: Turtle fire On: December 08, 2003 01:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A naked Duo with wet long hair, yum... very lovely scene indeed. I like the fact that Wufei has mistaken Duo as a fragile beauty for now. Tha sure would make the later 2x5 much more interesting. I am having a hentai vision of Duo cracking the whip in front of a shocked and tied-up Wufei right now. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 21:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Fight! A battle between Heero & Wufei w/ their gundams, I can't wait to read it. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: December 05, 2003 16:07 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I can't wait to see who will win this battle? I wonder what Duo will do? and How will his romance with Wufei will develop? Update soon, I can't wait to read more of this fic and keep up the awesome job.
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Reviewed By: Turtle Fire On: November 29, 2003 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Yeah! Happy, Happy, Joy, Joy, Wufei is coming over to fight Duo. I can't wait to see Duo reduces the "dragon" into an lizard egg!
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