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Title: 1-14
Reviewed By: vegetas_mate002@yahoo.com On: January 06, 2004 10:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been following this fic from saiyanjin secrets and I just wanted to tell you that everyday when I check my e-mail I look for the next Maintaining chapter, I'm so into this fic that I had to super glue my backside to the chair in order to stay in my seat. This is the sweetest and most heartwrending tale that I have read in too long a time and I just wanted to tell you to KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!! vegetas_mate002@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 09:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have it. I got it from Grokster. It's also located on Kazaa, but I know of no place online to get it. Sorry. Ah, I'd forgotten about that. He put his trust in Zarbon and Zarbon used it against him, almost crippling him.... Radditz was Vegeta's first, so it wasn't that. Short. Whatever Zarbon did stunted his growth.... O.O *looks it up* Malnutrition...no. Interleukin-6...no. Drugs...no. Hm, "The Causes of Psychogenic Dwarfism"...that's interesting. Okay, obviously in this case, psychogenic dwarfism is caused by extreme trauma and stress. I'd say Vegeta was going through that.... "Psychogenic dwarfism is a growth disorder that is observed between the ages of 2 and 15, caused by extreme emotional deprivation. The symptoms include decreased growth hormone (GH) secretion, very short stature, weight that is inappropriate for the height, and immature skeletal age. This disease is a progressive one, and as long as the child is left in the stressing environment, his or her cognitive and linear abilities continue to degenerate (3)." Hm, I'd say Vegeta has psychogenic dwarfism. ^_^ Boy, that was easy. But--I still don't know what he did or how Vegeta put 'his trust' in him. Hm...Perhaps next chapter, neh? Hm, I do remember a certain manga in which Zarbon had Vegeta restrained and clipped off his tail in the middle of a transformation, but I doubt that's it. It could be though.... Poor Veegee! He has a fever? How come? I mean, he states that Saiyans are impervious to disease.... It wouldn't happen to be the psychogenic dwarfism (I love writing that) kicking in would it? It says he'll continue to degenerate.... Which would lead to a lose of coherence--aka madness, which is what you hint at in the summary. Well, I'm sure Kakarott will take care of it. What worried me know is how he responded--wait a minute.... He repsonded to Piccolo's giving of energy by blacking out. And he constantly blacked out when with Frieza--after the Zarbon incident. Are these related? Hm.... I may be just thinking too much.
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Reviewed By: wawashkesh On: December 31, 2003 01:26 EST
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Great story! I don't have any chocolate at the moment, but I'll share my "Dulce Leche" Ice cream! Happy New Year!
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Reviewed By: Mikiko On: December 14, 2003 20:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
SQUEE!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 10:22 EST
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This is a great fic about Vegeta and Goku. I don't really read DBZ stories but this is one of the best ones i've read. Can't wait to see what the lemon's gonna be like. update soon!
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Reviewed By: yuikey On: November 28, 2003 21:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Graet fic.Please get the next chapter in soon!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Vegeta!!!
Reviewed By: Phaerie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 10:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fan fic is awsome!!! But please hurry and keep writing, I wanna see what happens with Vegeta and Goku!!! Keep up the good work, -Phaerie
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Title: *purrs*
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 20:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was SWEET!!! Mmm, fic you can write some chick and my Chichi so fucking hot together I can't wait to see how well you do w/ Goku & Veg. Til the next chappie ^~
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Reviewed By: I LUUV Vege!!!!!! On: November 10, 2003 06:51 EST
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WOOHOOO! Heheheee.. Nice! Wow.. Never imagined Goku to be the type to have just passion and lust fuelled sex!!! Hehe...!! I cant wait for Vege/Goku action!! yuri lemon?! I've never read one before.. Should I be scared? Good stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Where's the porn?
Reviewed By: malae On: November 05, 2003 15:50 EST
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If you're going to write bad fan fiction, at least include the Vegeta/Goku sex EARLIER!
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Reviewed By: wawashkesh On: November 04, 2003 10:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! It's very enjoyable! Hope to read the other chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: I LUUV VEGE On: October 28, 2003 04:22 EST
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WOOHOO! NICE!
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Reviewed By: saiyanprincess88 On: October 22, 2003 22:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im absolutly lovin it......c'mon please post the other 8 chapters....are goku and vegeta going to get together or what? please dont keep that from us much longer!!! i like lemonade!! just a little squeeze please? *puppy eyes* YOUR AMAZING!!! MUCH LOVE SAIYANPRINCESS88
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 12:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Your grammar and spelling are very good. But--what the hell is going on...? What saga does this take place in? Who is this new character and where did she come from? Not that I don't like yuri. I love yuri...but it's unexplained. Please explain this. Vegeta next chapter? Can't live without my Veegee!
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege * I shoudl really log in one day* On: October 21, 2003 03:19 EDT
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Nice! The Chi-Chi yuri is a little disturbing (im not a chichi fan!!!) But its tolerable! I like how this has started... I would like to read more of this!! Nice start!
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