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Title: hey!!!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 10:16 EDT
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HEY! I got dropped from your mailing list somehow (it's ok, when I found you'd updated, I had 3 nice whole chapters to read!) This fic is thoroughly enjoyable. The Bulma finding out scene pleased me to no end ("Woman, if you faint, I will let your ass fall."--priceless!) I am always taken with writers who can weave comedy into angst. Nice job! And here's my final word: MORE!!!! debbiechan
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 21:20 EDT
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I'm really getting into this fic. Please keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Jewel On: May 09, 2004 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm... typically history is boring.. but you actually worked it in in such a way that i could read it without falling asleep and they are just too cute together!!!!! =^-^= o yea.. and... UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Elenek *not logged on* On: May 09, 2004 16:20 EDT
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Nope, didn't fail any classes. So we finally found out what Zarbon did. Poor Vegeta. I loved the Radditz story. Especially the thing about reading history and getting all of the dates wrong. Seems to be a trait he inherited from Bardock. You also gave him a spin as to why he was so willing to kidnap Gohan. "did you know you were the only Saiyan not sent to hell?" --- I have a theory on this, as well as a fic I never finished or posted. I believe that there were more Saiyans in Otherworld at one point. They were very, very old. They left that part of Otherworld though when so many other fighters started showing up who had died protectiong their planets from the saiyan race. I'd say leave the traits mixed. I like thier current bond; the way it evens out some of the stronger character "flaws"(I really don't think that there are any true flaws but, oh well)and I particullarly like the role reversal of some traits. -El-
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Reviewed By: Jewel On: May 09, 2004 00:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww man... you are evil!!! *lmao!* Type up much more please, it is very very very interesting... poor guys *laughing*
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Reviewed By: EleneK *not logged in* On: May 05, 2004 05:48 EDT
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I am so gonna fail a class if I don't lay off these things for a while. But I like them alot. then everybody updates and of course I have to read the update I've been waiting on. I'm so weak. But you guys are so good at writing these things. I'm dissapointed in your Krillin. A best friend should never do that. Thier job is to keep the A@@wipes away from you, not be one. I remember when my best friend informed me that he was gay. We were staying at a hotel for this out of town event. He came out of the closet that night. By the next morning EVERYONE knew what had happened. But he never said anything to me. I was offended because I was the last to find out. It turned out though, that the reason he did not tell me was because mine was the reaction he was most worried about. I suprised him. I don't think that he was expecting me to be so easily accepting of it. I don't even want to think about what could have happened had my reaction been different. see. You can't kill off Krillin. He needs to live wallowing in misery and self pity knowing that he does not have a best friend anymore. Time to lighten up this review a little. I love the line about killing the bathroom. LMAO The whole 2 people being 1 thing was a kick butt *I really do try not to curse in reviews* idea. wow! Looking forward to your next chapter. -El-
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Title: throroughly enjoyable!
Reviewed By: debbiechan On: April 15, 2004 11:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the regretful Bulma and the weasly Yamcha (seems V always brings out the worst in Y!)and Vegeta's seeming to come to terms with the whole abandonment (the comparing sending Trunks away, though, to the King's giving V to Frieza was nice touch). You've got a good flow--I can't believe I'm following a yaoi story with such interest--! I really think it was the well-written yuri (do we ever see enough of it? NO!) that scared some people that interested me! I read DBZ stories for the Vegeta action, but it's really interesting to see Chi Chi in a different way and also to see B/Y together--I loved his painting her toenails! Seems so utterly *them!* Keep on rolling! debbiechan
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Title: Awakenings
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 15:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, man I so rarely give all 10's! You rock! I can't wait till you tar and feather that stupid voice in poor Vegeta's head! Maybe you'll get Goku to do the tar and feathering! =) Oooo, seeing B/Y for first time in long time... so let's hear it for the return of our pridefully arrogant prince and the best insults DBZ's experienced in under 200 episodes! And the crowd roars! ;) More, more!!! =)
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Title: couldn't wait!
Reviewed By: debbiechan On: April 11, 2004 11:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
rushed right away to read the latest installment! That was a great psychological torment scene--the voice is truly chilling. I know G&V are meant for one another in this fic but I'd still like to see Bulma back as a character, regretfull, bitchy, or just loving it up w/Yamcha! I am still delighted over your treatment of ChiChi! Keep up the amazing work! debbiechan
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Title: Chapter 24
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 13:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been avidly following this, as well as other stories, by you. You're an awesome author and I can't wait for the next chapter on this story! Please write it soon! =)
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Reviewed By: Janet On: April 06, 2004 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Really Really Hot I Love This Story Go ON With Ya Bad Don't Stop Till U Drop Write MORE please
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Title: help me convert
Reviewed By: debbiechan On: April 02, 2004 14:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a hardcore B/V fan who nonetheless takes a delight in G/V yaoi every now & then. I was wondering where you were going with this story and was pleasantly surprised at the depth of character development, the realistic yet lush lemons, the hopping great Radditz treatment (woo!)the well-paced (actually exquisitely drawn out) torture of our Vegggie, and well, um, I'm liking this fic in spite of my general dislike of AU Yaoi! Goku in character, Vegeta is interestingly angsty not utterly humiliated, and wow, a dyke Chi Chi--I think I always suspected--LOL! Keep up the good work! I want to see Vegeta comforted at last...and maybe a Bulma back to get a full realization of what she's lost, hmm? I love Bulma, she loved V--doesn't she want the best for him???? Well, look at this--you've made me write a long review. I'm impressed! Debbiechan put me on update list shalombayit@juno.com
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Reviewed By: starkat On: March 30, 2004 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i haven't reviewed before!!! i really like the story though. Especailly the part about Denda, Gohon's identity crisis, and then the Goku and Vegeta romance(that sounds realistic given Vegeta's past ). please keep writing i really need to know what happens!!! PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: babey kisses On: March 29, 2004 23:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story!! so yummy!!!! I have to know what happens!! pleeaase write again quickly!
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Reviewed By: elvenjedi On: March 03, 2004 22:32 EST
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The suspense is killing me! Please update soon!!
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