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Reviewed By: skullkidSG1 On: January 26, 2004 23:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is coming on good so far I could not see any spelling or grammar errors. But Iam pretty sure that you got the name Sandro from Heros of Might and Magic 3. It would be cool if you tried to describe the castle as being a mix with a traditional Japenese castle with the "necroplis" of Heros 3. I mean he could have had the castle anywhere from when Inuyasha's father died to now. If you have not heard of the game the please ignore what I just said. Anyway keep up the love interest and write more chapters. Tell me what you think of this if you get around to this I can be reached at clat@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 23, 2004 07:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice, very nice..
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Title: iire
Reviewed By: iire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 20:42 EST
Comment/Review:
its fine, but wheres the lemon?!?!?!?
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Title: Orb
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 21:38 EST
Comment/Review:
This is a cool story, I like it, you have a good talent for writing. You should put in more lemon tho. Who doesn't like good Inuyasha/Kagome lemon? lol ^.~
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 19:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha is so cute isn't he? ^_^ Great story!!! Please update soon!!! ^____^
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 28, 2003 13:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good.
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Reviewed By: sango9540 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 13:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dammit!!!! wut is with u people and the damn cliff hangers?? it's like the story is getting really good and then u go and stop it!!! that is so freakin mean!!! omg but ne wayz it is a really great story!!! *talks 2 herself, "well ofl course it is u idiot it has sesshomaru and miroku in it"* anyways please please please please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 20:22 EST
Comment/Review:
umm well just to tell u how can their be pen and paper in the feudal ages
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 20:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is so good!!! ^_^ update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Title: The right way
Reviewed By: JemStarGirl On: December 11, 2003 17:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get rid of kikyo please!!! I would love for u yourself to get rid of her and other then that I LOVED THE STORY!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lala su [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 17:17 EST
Comment/Review:
ahh, there we go, the explanation!!! Please add more MirokuxSango!! I love it :)
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Reviewed By: Aurora Fairchild On: November 18, 2003 16:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Say you'll right more
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Reviewed By: lala su [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 17:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey :) I read the update you did on chapter two, it was soooo nice ^___^ I never imagined Inuyasha to be so shy, and Sesshomaru stroking Rin was kinda cute, to :) Keep it up, I am looking forward for reviews ^___^
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Reviewed By: lala su [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 18:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok . . . there's MAJOR OOC here, but it's enjoyable. Could you please explain a bit how the curse was broken on Miroku's hand?? I didn't quite get that part :) Keep it up :)
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Aewi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 12:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
Could you please update your story soon? I'd like to read it ^_^
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