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| "MST of "Erotic Fantasies"" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: The One and Only Skye On: April 06, 2004 01:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
XD Man, this takes me back.. and makes me want to do another one XD I remember doing that third chapter too. XDDD Thank you for reminding me of this on Saturday! Oh yeh, I'll ask my mom on tomorrow or Wednesday too about the weekend ^^ Skye PS: XD Yep, us scorpios are so highly sexual. Cuase you know how I totally am *eye roll* XD;;
| Reviewed By: setosbabe On: March 25, 2004 10:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
some parts were good!!!
| Reviewed By: NakoruruOrukousaki On: November 10, 2003 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally I don't approve of MSTings, but I read this fic on aff.net and I thought the KKK comment was off the fucking wall, especially since the person writing it claims to be african-american,*snort* AND she/he/it goes so far as to say she/he/it put it in there for 'flirtatious reasons?' What the hell?! That fic wasn't even worth reviewing in my estimation, so I didn't bother, but just for the record, Kaiba would never say that. Plus, the original fic is poorly written, shamelessly ooc, and just all purposely pissed me off. You know what, I think I WILL have a talk with the author, after all. I can honestly say you improved my day by writing this. ~Nakoruru~
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