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Reviewed By: mwm On: November 26, 2003 16:41 CST
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still the most awsome story ive read!! update soon please!
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Domo Arigato Gozaimasu for such a wonderful chappie! it pissed me off that well-at first Miro was blaming Yash, then Yash was blaming them...and ya! ergh! they shud just shut up and kill Kikyo! *i REALLY hate her...* gah! well-good chapter hun! i guess this fic is gonna come to a close soon then huh...? well-this is really good so far! i hope yash chooses KAgome! plz update soooooon!!! *as you can!* -Lani
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Reviewed By: Riri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 19:23 CST
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: November 24, 2003 15:09 CST
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update soooooooooooooon! is getting good! what will inu-san dooooooooooo? lol. you know is gonna end with kagome . it has tooooooooo!!!!!!!cant wait for he next chapter
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Reviewed By: Felicity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS THE BEST INU-YASHA FAN FIC EVER!!!!!! it is so cute I can visualize every bit of it in my mind. Please update soon! Felicity_Angel46
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Title: Only one bad thing about this fic but it ruins most of the good things :(
Reviewed By: Little John of Locksland On: November 13, 2003 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am going to post this funny review about your funny story in a funny way because I am funny like that and thought it would be really funny to show you exactly how funny annoying it is to see a single funny word be repeated over and over again in a way when there is nothing funny going on. You think that was annoying? So do I... go and reread your own story and you'll see the exact same "funny" annoyance in almost as common a usage and perhaps in even less needed places. I'm not exactly sure where you gained this scary fascination for the word "funny" every other line within your story but it isn't (heh) 'funny'. After about the fifth occurence of that single word in a place it didn't belong I was ready to take a shovel to the word and smack it into a bloody pulp then use the shovel to dig a shallow grave may it rest in piece. But it didn't end in the first chapter, or the second, or the third, or the fourth... finally I gave up on hoping you'd learn from your mistake on your own. What really annoys me about this whole "funny" business is that it totally ruined an otherwise wonderful story. I'm currently rating this story as a 4/6/9/7/7 but if you fix these redundant and illogical referrences to that "funny" word I'll be bumping it up to 8/9/9/10/9. And, yes, I really feel that single word used ad infitum the way it has been has made that big of a difference to the story's quality.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 13, 2003 08:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh. Excellent cliffhanger! Please continue. Thanks for writing such an interesting story!!
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Title: lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya! wee! GOOD JOB! Kawaii! i love wen Koga comes and makes Yash jealousy...hes so cute wen he gets jealousy *giggles n blushes* hehe-ne wayz, i see...that was a very interesting story ur ojii-chan and onii-chan told you! demo-i feel sorry for Yash n i just think ish mean for Koga to say those mean things to my Yasha! *hugs Yash* ne wayz, good job n i hope u updates oon cuz this is an awesome fic! -Lani
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Reviewed By: mwm On: November 12, 2003 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an awsome story!!! It's really suspencful and makes u wanna come back and read some more! I wonder what will happen in the end! please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 21:29 CST
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You've done a fabulous job - even thought the story is not from the anime or the manga, the characters are acting very true to form. It's a great idea and very well done - please update soon!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: November 12, 2003 19:22 CST
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*throws rocks and when you dodge those throws bolder* *hits u on head* BULLS EYE!! U EVIL TURKEY! EEEEEEEEEEVIL TTTTTURKEY!!! THAT WAS EVIL CLIFFHANGER SO UR AN EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVILLLLLLLLLLLLLL TURKEY!! jk, if your not dead from the bolder then update and if you r dead then will your dead fingers to type! =p
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Reviewed By: Riri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 16:38 CST
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Hi there!!
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Reviewed By: dianne On: November 11, 2003 02:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you've made a very good story. it really touched my heart. the way between inuyasha and kagome is getting better i guest. please make inuyasha realize who is his true sweatheart ( should be kagome)i hope you will update soon. keep on the good work
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Title: great
Reviewed By: dianne On: November 09, 2003 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a really good story.it makes my tears flow down. in indonesia its very rarelly to find a great fanfic like this. just keep on writing the story riri. i like your story the best and i hope kikyo will end tragicly
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Reviewed By: dianne On: November 09, 2003 22:09 CST
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