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Title: hurry up!
Reviewed By: padfoot_puppyeyes On: December 13, 2003 12:11 CST
Comment/Review:
i probualy wrote something similar to this before, but here's a review along the same lines. HURRY UP!!!!!UPDATE!!!!!
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Title: GASP-P
Reviewed By: Jessi-chan of the West! On: December 06, 2003 14:30 CST
Comment/Review:
That was the worst cliffie ever!! HOW COULD YOU?! most cliffies i can live with but this one was cruel and unusual o_O
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Reviewed By: padfoot/puppyeyes On: December 05, 2003 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
would you hurry and update already? -padfoot/puppyeyes
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Reviewed By: :+:Star Dust:+: On: December 01, 2003 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!
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Title: Origional!
Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic very much, despite the odd grammar and misuse of a few words.. but I understand that Eng is not your 1st lang. Other than that, cool fic! Very origional and not very OOC at all. Great Job! Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Skttlezz On: November 30, 2003 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GRRRRRRRRR CLIFF HANGER *throws rock* DIE DIE DIE DIE!!!! (but no before next chapter!! P.S. OR ELSE!!:D)
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eee! good job! pooor Yash...and im glad that Kagome broke thru the spell and told Yash that! so sad that Yash has to choose...id die. so-he was going to let himself be killed then instead of fiting either of them? hn....he is such a sweet guy! i hate kikyo...she should defintely die....maybe its naraku thats coming and hes gonna kill her...or midoriko or something..i dunno. cant wait tho! hope ya update soon hun! -Lani
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Reviewed By: sessy-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 13:20 CST
Comment/Review:
its realy good so you better wright more or.... i will be mad update soon pwes
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Reviewed By: sesshoumaru_lover200 On: November 26, 2003 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you better right more on this or...or...or i will get sessy an kassy(my oc)on ya so =p
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Reviewed By: mwm On: November 26, 2003 16:41 CST
Comment/Review:
still the most awsome story ive read!! update soon please!
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Domo Arigato Gozaimasu for such a wonderful chappie! it pissed me off that well-at first Miro was blaming Yash, then Yash was blaming them...and ya! ergh! they shud just shut up and kill Kikyo! *i REALLY hate her...* gah! well-good chapter hun! i guess this fic is gonna come to a close soon then huh...? well-this is really good so far! i hope yash chooses KAgome! plz update soooooon!!! *as you can!* -Lani
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Reviewed By: Riri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 19:23 CST
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: November 24, 2003 15:09 CST
Comment/Review:
update soooooooooooooon! is getting good! what will inu-san dooooooooooo? lol. you know is gonna end with kagome . it has tooooooooo!!!!!!!cant wait for he next chapter
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Reviewed By: Felicity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS THE BEST INU-YASHA FAN FIC EVER!!!!!! it is so cute I can visualize every bit of it in my mind. Please update soon! Felicity_Angel46
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Title: Only one bad thing about this fic but it ruins most of the good things :(
Reviewed By: Little John of Locksland On: November 13, 2003 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am going to post this funny review about your funny story in a funny way because I am funny like that and thought it would be really funny to show you exactly how funny annoying it is to see a single funny word be repeated over and over again in a way when there is nothing funny going on. You think that was annoying? So do I... go and reread your own story and you'll see the exact same "funny" annoyance in almost as common a usage and perhaps in even less needed places. I'm not exactly sure where you gained this scary fascination for the word "funny" every other line within your story but it isn't (heh) 'funny'. After about the fifth occurence of that single word in a place it didn't belong I was ready to take a shovel to the word and smack it into a bloody pulp then use the shovel to dig a shallow grave may it rest in piece. But it didn't end in the first chapter, or the second, or the third, or the fourth... finally I gave up on hoping you'd learn from your mistake on your own. What really annoys me about this whole "funny" business is that it totally ruined an otherwise wonderful story. I'm currently rating this story as a 4/6/9/7/7 but if you fix these redundant and illogical referrences to that "funny" word I'll be bumping it up to 8/9/9/10/9. And, yes, I really feel that single word used ad infitum the way it has been has made that big of a difference to the story's quality.
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