| "Past Memories, Future Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: tashgurl89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 19:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
How long does it take you fanfic authors to update? It can't take that long, can it?
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Reviewed By: blazeing bulet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon? This story is awesome!
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Title: .....hey....
Reviewed By: Mizu no Megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 17:19 CST
Comment/Review:
hey, tora, i noticed something. I think we're talking to ourselves. i havent had a review in forever and i think i should stop... i think i'm fresh out of ideas anyway... -_- sorry everyone, i think....
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Reviewed By: Mizu no Megami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 11:48 CST
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Hey everyone... heh... i cant see them again. ^-^
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Reviewed By: razorblademagarita *logged off* On: January 16, 2004 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow it took me a while to get to this one. keep going...
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Title: ................................. bad
Reviewed By: makumba-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 17:09 CST
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................ hehe........... oops.... i just sent the same thing twice..... ugh my computer is just like........ ugh.......... anyway.... now u have the reviews to update! lol! anyway.... THE EWW-NESS! ooooooo it was soooo gross! ugh! anyway..... now that i'm made that my comp sent that twice i'm going to go torture the yeast cop *fat cop stares at hyper tora*...... *evil grin* WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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Title: UGH
Reviewed By: makumba-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 17:07 CST
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yes people we were suspended and now have counciling.... don't ask we just wrote something stupid..... very stupid.... anyway that was yesterday and now i'm hyper again weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Mizu:.......... did u drink the coffee i gave u? Tora: nope i'm just naturally hyper..... u should know, we just watched shit come out a a rhino and elephants ass in a science movie today..... ok to much info but anyway......
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Title: ugh
Reviewed By: makumba-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 17:05 CST
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the suspension.... the counciling..... ugh...... yup we are in BIIIIIIIIIG trouble.... but that was like..... yesterday and now it's a for day weekend! weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! HEHE TORA IS HYPER TODAY! Mizu:........... did u drink the coffee i gave u? Tora: nope i'm always this hyper..... and u should know u were with me this morning.... in school... watching shit come out of a rhino and elephants ass in a science movie..... O THE EWW-NESS!!!!!
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Title: ugh
Reviewed By: makumba-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 17:05 CST
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the suspension.... the counciling..... ugh...... yup we are in BIIIIIIIIIG trouble.... but that was like..... yesterday and now it's a for day weekend! weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! HEHE TORA IS HYPER TODAY! Mizu:........... did u drink the coffee i gave u? Tora: nope i'm always this hyper..... and u should know u were with me this morning.... in school... watching shit come out of a rhino and elephants ass in a science movie..... O THE EWW-NESS!!!!!
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Title: ...................
Reviewed By: makumba-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 16:52 CST
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ok y am i crazy in chapters 1 and 2? ok i know i'm hyper and ur making a story where... the chocolate and everything but.... ugh o well..... anyway i forgot u were still writing this story! oopsy! i thought that u were going to redo this one! u need to tell me these things more often! i mean... we sit right next to each other in class for bob's sake! lol anyway when do u and i come in, in this one?..... the yeast cop! weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee my dude that i will torture for eternity! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA! lol well anyway c-ya when i c-ya!
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Title: TROUBLE!!!!
Reviewed By: Mizu no Megami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 19:19 CST
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o no o nooooo I'm in so much trouble.... i was suspended and now i will have counciling....grr..... please talk to makumba-chan if you want or need something. *-* wish me luck tomorow!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mizu no Megami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 20:11 CST
Comment/Review:
SRY!!! I CANT SEE THEM AGAIN!!! @#$%!!!!! *sobs* im sorry peoples... *sniffle*
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Reviewed By: bunnylover On: January 01, 2004 19:47 CST
Comment/Review:
what r u so sorry 4? its a really good fic although u the last time you updated was dec 19 but then again evry1 has their own life and stuff they gotta do...ecxpt maybe me anywayz umm ya ttfn
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_girl (too lazy to log in) On: January 01, 2004 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay you have a good plot but there are a couple of things that keep bugging the shit out of me 1.Your chapters are to short 2.Your chapters have no subject they're all spontaneous. 3.It's getting sorta boring Please work on these. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mizu no Megami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 15:00 CST
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o man, this is like my eighteenth review on myself... *sobs* im sorry. ^_^ i couldnt resist! please keep reviewing! I know i've been like, dead for at least a few months, but Sessy was sweet enough *sessy: sure....* to revive me. ^-^ ii
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