| "The Enigma of Power" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 09:43 CST
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great story! I love how you write! I know it's been a while since you updated, but i would love to see how it ends!
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Reviewed By: rinjii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 01:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, the characters are way way way ooc! the basic story line is ok though. you might want to try to make at least sess a little more... mean. if you know what i mean. he isn't competly off, but when i sit here and read this, i keep cracking up because some of the things sess says and does, he would never really do. but hey! that's ok, because it's not like this is the actuall story line and this will actually happen. it's just what you, me, and a bunch other little screaming girlfans wish. but overall, not bad. i would suggest you keep writing this and other stories. you have a talent for making your readers want to continue reading, even if they don't particulary like or agree with the story. in conclusion i'd give ya a B+. not bad, but still could use a bit of improvment! keep writing! do you think i wrote enough? ^_^ ciao!!!!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: September 08, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I love it and I can't wait for you to update again. ^-^ I do hope Kagome's relationship with Inuyasha can survive what she has to tell him.
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Title: The Enigma of Power
Reviewed By: AngelMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luv it......i can't wait to find out what happens next......what everyone's reaction will be and such....pllllllzzzzzzzzz update soon......
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Title: The Enigma of Power
Reviewed By: AngelMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 08:46 CDT
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OMG I can't believe that Kag went off on Sess like that........luv'd thou...that was something he needed to hear and of course Kag is the only one brave enough to go against him and say it.....gonna go read more so ja ne!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Amber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 16:30 CDT
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it was worth the wait and the reread of the story i truly enjoyed this chapter sess is sooo cute hehehe so Sess and Kag are gunna unite demons and humans makes sense i cant wait to read about the wedding you are goin to write a chap for that right ohh i cant wait to find out what happens next thannx for the great read keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: hColleen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 08:45 CDT
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Very nice :D I like your style. It seems you do your homework before you write :D I look forward to reading the rest of your works :D Thank you
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 15:51 CDT
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maha!! me likey!! i can not wait for the next udpate!!!! so much love never forget the love!!! i am really liking this story!! plz update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 23:29 CDT
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cools beans.
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job keep up all the good ork and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 22:56 CDT
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WHEEEE update! good chappie, kinda short though. update again soooooon!!!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 13:40 CDT
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inu got what he diserved!!! that jerk!!! he should of been kind to her when he had the chance!!! well any way!! i can not wait for ur next udpate!! much love never forget the love!!!!
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Reviewed By: Amber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 19:39 CDT
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Another awesome story I must agree with you i like the way you portray sess it suits him awe they be bonded woo hoo i hope yasha and kagome can find a way to make a truce thanx for the great read once again i cant wait to find out what happens next
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Reviewed By: spdsgirl On: July 21, 2004 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Update soon!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (not signed in yet) On: July 20, 2004 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i mean wow that was good keep up the good work !!!! ^_^ i hope to be reading more soon please update as soon as possable!!!! please? keep up the good work! ^_^
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