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| "Second Chances" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: janeva On: October 24, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great i hope you plan on continuing. so plz update soon. ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Mericle On: October 23, 2003 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
*anime tears* see what you did, you got me all teary-eyed and stuff. tear, tear, I'm crying. Rarely, I am, rarely. ah boo hoo. Plz continue, can't wait for next chapter. I'll try to be patient, but you better continue or I have to get my peeps on you...ya heard (lol). bye
| Title: Second chances
Reviewed By: Veronica On: October 23, 2003 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic is GREAT,AWSOME,COOL,GOOD!Please keep on writing!Your story was good even for the first chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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