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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! another good chapter!oh my! Kanna is stealing Kagome's soul?! well-this is really good. i guess Sesshy-sama is strating to like Gome now or someting? Well-i understand that ya don't know how to explain Shippo's death and ya what ya sed, so thanks for telling me! ^-^ Poor Kagome! Porr Sesshy though, but he keeps his promise! Well, this was a good chapter hun! Hope ya had a good thanksgiviing and i hope ya update soon! -Lani
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Reviewed By: TaiyoukaiAyumuoftheWesternLands [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it but ididn't get it! who died?!
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Title: lo!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee! wow...that was da bomb!!!!! it was nice n loooong! i LOVED it!!! *sniffles* i still miss the little tyke...Shippo....but-i is confoosed on how he died...i hope that u will explain laterz! ooooh! wonder hu's coming for Kagome!!!! n what she mite never live down! eep! need next chapter, but take ur time! its all good! keep it up!!! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Blue Saiyan Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
laughing hysterically Oh, um, sorry about that. This chapter was great! I couldn't quiet figure out what he was laughing about until it was said. Just picturing Sesshoumaru idly walking behind Kagome getting his jollies, too funny! Ok, couple of things I'd like to know. First, if you continue on, do you plan on doing a lemon scene? I really like how you have them interract with each other, it's kinda casual but seductive too. Second, Do you have an update schedule, ex. every Monday or once a month or whatever? I like to keep a watch for my favorite stories when I know they're going to be updated. That's enough rambling for now, update soon! TTFN
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Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: November 10, 2003 02:03 CST
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I like the ending.. I good.. the swimming part is good too.. but .. the flash must not be so good for our fav miko ne? . . . . . . . Keep writing !!!
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Title: Not gonna rate this til its been revised...
Reviewed By: Little John of Locksland On: November 08, 2003 22:39 CST
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I just have one comment at this time... inconsistency can be a pain. Check out chapter 6 of this story in which you have Kagome say to Inuyasha "Inuyasha can I sit with you?" and no faceplant for the lil inu whereas every other occasion she says the words even when not intended for him it sends him in a plummet. Other than that nothing really jumps out at me at present. The problem is that the 'other than that' is similar to the reporter who asked Jackie Kennedy after JFK's assassination, "Other than that, Mrs. Kennedy, how was Dallas?" Fix that one mistake and any others if I missed them and it would be a wonderful story. But as is I'd have to downgrade my ratings so much for that collosal messup that I am going to avoid giving a rating until you've had time to fix it so that I may instead rate the revised version. Should be a simple enough thing to fix too... either change what she says to being "Inuyasha may I join you?" or add the customary header to mother earth complete with appropriate anger and swearing. What sickens me about this situation isn't that you made this kind of a mistake... it's all of the thousands of people who've read it and never even noticed it or even worse the people who've actually given a review and not a single one of them ever made even a passing mention to the SNAFU. Shows the quality of the minds these days I guess...
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee! good job! wow....if i was KAgome i would be soooo disgusted! im surprised she didnt throw up when the worm squished! Ewwww! terrible worms! eek! nah, wasnt expecting a worm youkai! goog job! ya fooled me! hehe, n i liked the seesh.kag interaction! andi cant wait to see tha trouble kagome starts up! will rin forgive her for breaking her rock? well, good job! update soon! -Lani
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! okay! wow! good so far! poor kagome! she going thru so much shi-er stuff.....ahh screw it! damn naraky to hell! y was he so mean in doing that to kagome?! and i REALLY wanna know wut hapened to Shippo...how he died n stuff....maybe sesshn kag can be talkin n he asks her bout how shippo died.....sigh, well, good job n i did recommend ur story in my fic! update soon! -Lani
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! this is good so far! only on da shippo cliff hanger part tho, thanks to a certain brother of mine....but this is ogod none the less! it made me cry! so u can tell it weas good! ya, this story was drawing me to it but i fought the urge and eventually gave in....trying to update my won fis ya know! well, good job, and i really like this story so far! update asap! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Blue Saiyan Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 09:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must update soon! What a person could do in Kagome's position. She should be so lucky to be made his *personal* servant. ~_^
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Reviewed By: lil'sesshi On: October 25, 2003 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good cant wait till you update.....
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