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Reviewed By: Jessica Shade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 13:30 CDT
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OMG!!! This ficcy is probably better than any fic ive ever read before!!!! I cant wait untill you update!!
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Reviewed By: stupid gal On: April 11, 2005 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee write more it soooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooood
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Reviewed By: alatero [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 22:26 CDT
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AWESOME STORY!!!! I hope you update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Title: love it!!!!!!!1
Reviewed By: dark sapir [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please keep writing i'm loving it sooooo much! you have to continue!!!!
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Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: January 30, 2005 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the last section with the dialogue between Fluffy and Ayame and then with The Queen. Great to have Sango join them as we have astory remenicent of many of those chase movies so keep them going and lets see how Sango and Miroku get along. BTW is Dai a counter to Naraku's Kanna? dennisud
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 30, 2005 17:24 CST
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So, Sango makes her presence felt, already seeing through their disguise...at least she is on their saide, another ally in their fight. The question that bothers me is will Kagome and Inuyasha retain the alias of being married even though they will be given alternate identification...also how about Sango and Miroku? Two couples, one with child? Sorry, rambling again. Excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 14:17 CST
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I'm glad to see another update. I've been following this story and I like it so far. I hope to read another chapter soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: LukeShaehl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting fic you got here, you're doing good keeping everyone in character and making things progress believably.
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Reviewed By: dark sapir [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Tis is really good, so write more ASAP. Please.
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 18:48 CST
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Excellent chapter! So, Sango finally arrives, Miroku marries Inuyasha and Kagome (at least in the eyes of Kagome and the Kami's) and Shippou has come with them and will be posing as Inu and Kag's son... Brilliant, I look forwards to seeing what happens to the newly formed family. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: sarahlovesDBZ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there! Just wanted to review your fanfic, and I think you've done a very GOOD job with this story so far, and I will definatly be looking forward for your update! I like that you've made your chapters long! Hope you update soon! -Sarah
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Reviewed By: Descendant of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 22:10 CST
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Love the story so far. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: whispering On: October 27, 2004 19:28 CDT
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did u give up on this story??? and ur other story?? Is there going to another update??? Please continue ur stories!!! Tellus if u r going to quit ur stories or continue.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 16, 2004 20:37 CDT
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I am truely sorry I didn't spot this one before, this is an incredible story, one I have truely enjoyed reading. It's just...perfect. It plays out wonderfully, all that's missing is Sango to leave Miroku with someone and everyone is paired off. I look forwards to reading future chapters. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 16:21 CDT
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I really like your story so far. I hope you update soon and thanks again for posting this story.
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