Title: This was GOOD! Reviewed By: Em0tions On: October 28, 2003 13:06 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really liked this story! i never really thought of how the Shaman Fight with Yoh would have been from Faust point of veiw. I was too busy getting angery at him for torturing poor Manta! The evil sexy man! But yeah, I really don't know that much about Faust yet. I've only seen up to episode 42. Well, I think that's the episode. Te ones when they're in American and are trying to find the Patch Village. But again I really liked this tory. I liked how you made him think about Eliza and how it pained him to think of Yoh and Anna being able to have the life that he wanted to have with her. if only sh hadn't died... But yeah! I hope you write anoher story soon! You are areally talented writer.
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