| "The affair" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yakari_Taito aka Luna Wolf aka Matt4ever On: April 29, 2004 22:16 CDT
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i hope you get it fixed soon!
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Title: Chap 6
Reviewed By: kojiboshi / Carine^^ On: February 16, 2004 03:21 CST
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Poor, poor kids.... I wonder why Yama married Sora in the TV serie.... Well, I just want to know what will happen to this poor child.. Carine^^
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Reviewed By: Luna Wolf aka Matt4ever On: February 15, 2004 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue this soon! the fic gets better end better every chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Luna Wolf aka Matt4ever On: February 01, 2004 10:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You took Sooo long to update. i liked that chapter and please continue soon!
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Title: chap 5
Reviewed By: Carine^^ / kojiboshi On: February 01, 2004 04:01 CST
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Yeah! A new chapter!!! Please continue I really like this story!!!!!! I know it's not a very constructive review, but knowing people love our work must compensate that ^^ Carine^^ (too lazy to log in)
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Title: Gah >.o
Reviewed By: ruddykitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 14:04 CST
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um.. ideas for the ending.. well... eh o.o Sora could walk in on them.. or something and confront them about what is going on. While arguing, they get on the subject about what happened so long ago, and that all he ever really wanted was Taichi. Matt apologizes for what happened when they were young and he just wants Taichi. Sora ends up with Mimi in the end and the two boys go to Matt and Tai's custody after they get married. Yeah >.o whee! also, the kids could stay with their mother, Sora and Mimi from time to time for like, visitng. DAAAAWF MUSHY! :P Keep it up yo, :) I really like this story.
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Reviewed By: hikari princess On: December 08, 2003 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito! taito!
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Title: chap 4
Reviewed By: kojiboshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 03:29 CST
Comment/Review:
OK, it seems that I can review this fic on my father's computer but not on mine...Strange thing, perhaps you could check the "accepting the anonymous reviews" (or something like that) in your profile, like that even if we have difficulties with the log in, we could let an anonymous review... Anyway, I want the next parts, because I want to know if at the end Yama could have custommy (arg I don't remember the good word to say he keeps his children, or at least one...) of his sons. Carine^^
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Reviewed By: taito4ever On: December 06, 2003 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! great fic! continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Luna Wolf On: December 06, 2003 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah!!! i can finally review! i've been trying to review since the first chapter i like yama on the bottom better did u say u wanted ideas? maybe sora could walk in on them
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Title: chap 3
Reviewed By: kojiboshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 23:30 CST
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Miracle, I can review!!!!! it's what the 10th time I try!!!! OK, now I'm here, I won't be original, but I love this story and I want the next part, if I leave enought review to be at 10 that would be good?? Carine^^
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Reviewed By: digigirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi what up? sorry ate suger and I like your story.One thing who is Yamato and he Matt? sO i LIKE YOU FINISH IT PLEASE AND THANK YOU.
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Title: BAH!
Reviewed By: ruddykitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 02:34 CST
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crap. I hope you haven't stopped writing on this... e.e I would have reviewed more (because this is a wonderful story! i love what is happening) and earlier, but i just got back on... *cries* my e-mail account was accidentally deleting notices of new chapters and such from mediaminer, thinking it was junk mail. all i have to say about that is FUCK!!! i want to know the reeesst *sobs*
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Title: chap 2
Reviewed By: kojiboshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 13:49 CST
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I'm happy that my email convinces you to post this part (yes, it was me ^^). I try to review before, but I couldn't be recognized by the system...stupid thing.. Well, perhaps you could have more reviews if you accepted anonymous review, but I say that and have just 1 or 2 by story, so it's not the good solution... OK, continue writing, I will review each chapter if you want! Carine^^
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Reviewed By: ruddykitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww I want to see this finished! I love the realtionship Yama has with his two sons. It's so cute! Please post the rest! I don't wanna wait for 5 reviews ;.;
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