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Reviewed By: paniwi (for some weird reason nli) On: March 20, 2005 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was....wow....although it was kinda predictable from the start that malik and Ryou would die. I don't mind, it was great nonetheless. Usually I'm not really into alternate universe (unless it's ancient egypt setting) in which nothing reallly relates to the anime/manga anymore, but I really enjoyed this. keep up the good work *looks at date* what am I saying, that's exactly what you have been doing since you posted this, lol
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 18:15 CDT
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I was expecting this to be more... gory or something, but it wasn't. tragic, dramatic, romantic at the end... absolutely beautiful, thank you!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Miroki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WAAAHHH!!!!! So sad!!! You killed them!!! WAHHHHH!!!! VERY nice ending but so saaddddd!!!! Wow...I've never seen a death fic so carefully structured before...I'm gonna cry... TT_TT
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Title: fssdfs
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 09:43 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
everyone seems to be killing ryou these days... ;_; all deh bishies is dien. it was good story, too bad its dun now ... WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH now im all sad!
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Reviewed By: al On: February 07, 2004 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wwwoooaaaa hoo. i definitely didn't suspect it at all. poor yami.. i suddenly realized that this was a malik and ryou story. hmm. very nice. the top angst writer.(period)
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Title: Flip o_o
Reviewed By: ShadowWolfGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luffed the freakin' story! ^____^ too bad Malik and Ryou died ;_; *cries and goes off to read your other stories* Actually I was gonna cry too but I didn't o_O; GOOD STORY! ^^
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Title: dfgfrgdf
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 18:14 CST
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ebil short chappie.. short, but im gunna wanna know whats gunna happen to yami, n malik, n ryou.. and IM GUNNA MURDERIZE KEITH! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR! lol.. update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: YokoKat On: January 18, 2004 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! You've written a REALLY good fic. I've only recently begun reading it and I am addicted to it. It's really good and I hope that you will write the next chapter. Your plot is excellent as well. PLEASE CONTINUE! ^.^x
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Reviewed By: al On: January 17, 2004 12:58 CST
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thank you for not letting it be keith! whew. devlin or otogi? isn't so bad when he stops with the insults, the flirting, having a big ego, etc...
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Reviewed By: Timma On: January 15, 2004 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is writting really well. Even though I'm not much one for cliff hangers, you make nice stops for readers into wanting to read more. I definatly want to. Plus, apperiate the place you stopped to ask fans to have a rape scene or not. I definatly say go for it! I feel this would be a good rape scene. Having Malik in a mix of rage and perhaps a little regret as well. But, if say like Otagi or Bandit Keith, rapes Ryou in front of Malik, even though he says go ahead and do it, even though he meant it at first then perhaps while watching the scene, will he regret? O.O sorry this is my impression I'm getting so far in the story. If I'm mistaken, please forgive me. But please continue.
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Title: .... O.O
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 18:22 CST
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UMMM! WHAT THE HELL????!!!!!! ;_; NUUUUUUU TAHTS EBIL, OTOGI AND RYOU... WHERES MALIK?? WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH, and wats up wif yami??? NEWAYS, dun du that again, well,at least u didnt write a keith lemon, EWWWWWWW lol
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Title: meeep
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, i kno i asked for the rape scene in mai previous review, BUT im waaaaaaaaaaay more happier with what you wrote, n im happy for malik n ryou ^^ YAY neways, update zanshi soon please iight
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Reviewed By: al On: January 09, 2004 19:54 CST
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YEAH this was better than the rape scene! i definitely didn't want keith to actually yuck succeed but at least it wasn't there. poor yami.. anyway at least malik gets to be intimate with ryou.
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Reviewed By: JessiRae On: January 04, 2004 20:19 CST
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Are you a hacker?
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Reviewed By: al On: January 04, 2004 19:39 CST
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show the scene.. now i'm leaning toward Malik and Ryou. i must be hungry..
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