| "Zanshi" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: al On: January 04, 2004 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
show the scene.. now i'm leaning toward Malik and Ryou. i must be hungry..
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EBIL SHORT CHAPPIE! YAY RAPE SCENE ^^ UPDATE SOON! JOO BAKA! XD
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Title: THE ANGST!
Reviewed By: al On: December 26, 2003 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!! EVIL KEITH!!! EVIL KEITH!! YAMI SAVE RYOU! poor malik. looks like yugi is the annoying little brother type. hehe.
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Reviewed By: Timma On: December 24, 2003 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. You do leave good suspenses as a opening for the next chapter to come. Now what will happen between Malik and Ryou? I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: joeylover11 On: December 22, 2003 16:42 CST
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i thought that was really great i usually dont read ficks like this one but i couldnt stop reading it. great job!
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY WATS up with the short ass chappie? BETTER UPDATE SOON! lol... i cant wait it see wa happens... XD
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOH NOOOOOOOOO! NOO NO NO!!!! MALIK ISH MAD! >< CRAP! aww shyt! this next chappie gun be good as hells i bet... lol iight update soon!
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Reviewed By: al On: December 07, 2003 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryou is sooo adorable!!! now i'm starting to lean to yami and ryou instead. by the way i noticed that yugi isn't really in the story.
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Title: weewoo
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 12:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA! I KNEW IT, i knew Yami wood ask Ryou that , well, kinda X.X lol n malik... ima bite him, damn traitor, oh well, he jus wanna see Ryou, how sweet ^^
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Reviewed By: al On: November 29, 2003 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
i knew malik was too tough too kill.
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Title: YAAAAAAAY!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! OH MY RA! MALIK IS ALIVE!!!!!! WHOO! ^^ THANK YOU! *throws a party* ..i bet Yami gun ask Ryou to sleep wif him ... IONO, and yes, we are waiting fuh Regret ;_; iight, thankie ^^
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If Ryou can't have Marik, and i understand the no-Kura thing, then who WILL he be with.. heh no one else is good for him X.X cause you cant have seto n ryou.. that would make yami wanna kill like mad... lol so thats a predicament... wee woo... anyways... update soon kay ^^
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Title: so far its okay
Reviewed By: al On: November 11, 2003 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have a weird habit of reviewing at least a week after i read a fic so don't take me as a slow reader(dead slow typer yes). Its kind of weird that Ryou is like that. Shocking he isn't dead. i know i would be. don't kill off too many characters and i can't wait to see how yugi is like.
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Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 13:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Thats hard core shyt... but at least no one really important died... poor Ryou...>
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Title: Deme
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 21:07 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the fact that you did a new plot twist.. but i love and hate you for killing a bishie. i was crying... seriously.. anyway, please continue, at first i thought i wasnt gunna like this, but now i do... poor malik... n i wanna hug ryou so badly!!!!!! its not fair... WHY MALIK DIED IN SUCH A WAY!!!!!!!!? *starts crying again* mean yet talented writer >
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