| "Agonizing Pleasure" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Title: For you readers:
Reviewed By: scarredbride [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 10:55 CDT
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Hey its me, just wanted to let all you new reader's know that, this story keeps the female nameless due to the fact there are Kikyou and Kagome haters everywhere. I think the best way to portray something this dark and violent was to allow the reader to place in their mind whichever miko they wanted to. It causes a creative comment normally then because sometimes, they feel it was Kagome even though they like Kagome, or Kikyou even though they like Kikyou. Kind of interesting psychologically in the end if you truly sit and think about it. Yet for everyone out there, to me it was Kikyou. Granted I don't hate her as much now as the series progressed since I wrote the story, but I still choose her. Kikyou might be a bitch, but in the end she was innocent(or at least the show never said she had sex with Inu or others). Also for the person who said about Kikyou didn't die by rape in the show. You are absolutely correct, but this was not based on the show, just the characters... remember you must keep an open mind for original fanfictions. Not everyone writes following the series. Anyway, gonna go. Thanks for the wonderful reviews everyone. Ja!
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Reviewed By: hello *sexychicklet when logged in* On: July 07, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that the miko should have been kikyo and then InuYasha went off to go be w/ kagome! hahaha! 'Cause i absolutley HATE kikyo!! keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Bitch of the Highway Thieves [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 13:35 CDT
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I like it! You have to guess whether its Kikyo or Kagome, but that just makes it all the better. I think you had kagome in mind, however, because you kept calling the girl 'innocent', and I totally don't think anyone sees Kikyo as 'innocent'.
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Title: ummm...
Reviewed By: Kagome69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was good. I was positive that this was Kagome because Kikyo is dead...and we all know that she didn`t die raped!!!! but Kagome...we dunno yet cuz she`s not dead yet!!!
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Reviewed By: HAHAHahHAh On: June 18, 2004 23:57 CDT
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WOW...is sadomasochistic even a word? I not...it..um...needs to be. I like that or what it was. And that other person was right...it could be Kikyo. But I highly doubt it. Kikyo's not so innocent it seems so he couldn't be talking about her...right? YEAH...I'm right...?
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Reviewed By: My Love Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this one-shot and even though it was dark, i loved the way you portrade the charaters in it. I'm not sure but was the girl you were thingk of Kagome when you wrote this? I was just wonerding for one line in the story made me think of her and that was the one about the girl's innocence. I just hope it wasn't really her though because I am a Kagome/Inuyasha fan and I don't think that would have been right. I think it should be Kikyou in this one-shot...but then again, it could be either of them. *shrugs* All well. I guess ut'll just have to remain a mystery. ^_^ ~ My Love Inuyasha
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Reviewed By: M1Lk Ch0C0l4t3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH YEAH! I KNOW THAT IS KIKYO THAT GOT RAPED FUCKED AND DIED!!! OF IHT IS KAGOME, I SWEAR< i WILL FUCKING HUNT YOU DOWN AND KILL YOU! i know it is Kikyo, so dont worry bout that. n_n JA NE
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Title: Definitly not Kikyou..
Reviewed By: Kikyou-chan On: May 06, 2004 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic! It definitly had to be Kagome since she wears a two inch skirt when fighting demons.. Kikyou is way to pure for something like that. I was angry when I heard you were a Kikyou hater. Oh well... Maybe one day you'll see the light and realize that Kikyou is the best. Keep up the good work. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Aki-chan On: April 06, 2004 20:06 CDT
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Oooohh...awesome...Naraku's such a cute little sadist. ^^; Well, I think it was Kikyo. But that's just me. If it was Kagome...that'd be...disturbing...but anyway, yeah. My guess is Kikyo...great fic! --Aki
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Reviewed By: Aki-chan On: April 06, 2004 20:05 CDT
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 (nsi) On: March 27, 2004 23:20 CST
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Great lemon and I nodat it was Kikyou even b4 I went back and read all da reviews cuz I remember u mentioning how much u hate Kikyou. While I was reading da fic though I kept adding Kag's name whenever it said miko or she and dat screwed me up in da end and got me angry. Was thinkin of flamin till I reread da oneshot and realized I was reading it rong! Great lemon though, really dark and freaky and.. LEMON! My obsessions with lemons is not explainble. I liked da rape and all though I think its horribly wrong in da real world gotta admit it's kinda appealing for fanfics and shit. I'm a sick lil bitch rn't I? *sigh I read da person dat flames u and itwas a buncha bs. And to whoeva Setsuna is dat bitch shouldn't talk shit bout Kag. A slut my ass! WTF is wrong wit her? lol, please ignore my pointless ranting, ur getting me all worked up cuz of how good dis is! Dis fic was really sad cuz all though I do hate kikyou, I dun really think she deserves dat much. Ps. Srri if my review is scrwed. I dun think, just type and wat I rite usually dunt connect
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Reviewed By: yomofo On: March 06, 2004 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man I don't care who it was it was a good story
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Reviewed By: IceYoukaiEnchantress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS KIKYO BECUZ SHES A REALLY FUCKED UP BITHCH AND A HOE AND A SLUT AND THE ONLY ONE WHO COULD HAVE THAT MUCH PLEASURE IN BEING RAPED!!!!!!!! KAGOME RULEZ!!!!!!!!!!!JA NE ^_^
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Reviewed By: too interested in the story to log in On: February 28, 2004 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...uhm... is it just me or did everyone think it was Kikyo? I thought it was Kagome.... huh.... But it WAS a brillient story, and a great dark fic.... if only i could write that well... *sniffle* oh well. it rocks. ^-^ dont worry about me. i'm just a bitter horrible writer... lol.
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Reviewed By: Kayzer76th [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Hmm, an entertaining story! I don't know whether the raped girl is Kikyou or Kagome. That's the best point of your story, keeping the people guessing around. Probably, I might think it was Kikyou in favor of the majority, however, on the second though, I wishes it might be Kagome (coz she looks sweet...) Keep the good working!
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