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Reviewed By: daichi kaido On: December 16, 2003 05:38 CST
Comment/Review:
muwahahahahahaha! more more! you evil little thing you. well... you're not really evil. there's a lot of stuff and fluff going on here instead of just raw sex, which i love don't get me wrong. so continue, oh master of the... okay, i'm spent. that's all i've got. i think it's absolutely adorible that selphie likes irvine... although are you planning on having her fall for squall instead? questions questions... riku in a loin cloth. sexy... kairi with a keyblade. really sexy. keep up the great work, luv!
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Reviewed By: Pyrokitsune On: November 23, 2003 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE don't leave me hanging. Finish the story. I think it would be great if Sora and Riku got married in the last chapter. I have great ideas. Keep up the good work. (wink)
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Reviewed By: YaisaKitty On: November 21, 2003 22:55 CST
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o^_^o I love you! you're so awesome! poor Sora... he's all tortured... ^^ good thing he's got Ri-chan to comfort him... I really liked that last part of the chappie (yea yea, I know it was all angsty but still...) and the limey part was nice ^^ ya think ya could do a nice lemon for us mediaminer readers? I'm sure you'd do a pretty nice job considering how nummy your lime was... but take your time with the lemon if ya have to... we don't want it to be forced... no no that would be sad... lemons are always so much better when ya know the couple's ready for it... heh much babbling from the me... pretty much my weird rambley way of askin' for a lemon (or two or five *grins*) somewhere in the story... well, I can't wait for the next great chappie o^_^o *pouts* you need to get more reviews...
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Reviewed By: Sardius-Sky On: November 13, 2003 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00ts! sweeeeeeeeeeeet. i like this fic. alot alot alot. *bounces* i don't give a damn if you have that little reviews. it rocks!!! *Grins*
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Reviewed By: SeYa On: November 12, 2003 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I Love your fic it's a great piece of writing. Hope to read the next chapter soon. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: YaisaKitty On: November 11, 2003 20:09 CST
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KAWAII! I love your fic! please please PLEASE post the next chappie soon ^^ I dying to read it x_x
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