| "Now Entering Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess Godess On: November 05, 2003 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey i really like this fic so if u dont mind whitch i know u dont PLZZZZZ UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: ericyamaha89 On: November 05, 2003 13:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i tihnk its good so far and cant wait till chap 5
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 13:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, more please this is really good! I hope you update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story so far, but you might want to think about sperating the dialog in the story it would less confusing and easier to read.
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