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Title: email
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 15:55 CST
Comment/Review:
well basically the email was about me saying that the "threat of falmes" review wasn't for you at all, it's just that someone put in a rude flame and i deleted it before anyone could read it. Therefore it LOOKED like it was for you but it wasn't. Just to let you know... thanks for reviewing lately, it helps i promise. And your story is going very well at the moment i can't wait to read more.
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Title: AH!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 22:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh no! Once again Yami can't suffer! *sniff* Oh i can't bare to watch!.....haha just kidding. I really hope u got my email. Please update soon!
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 16:09 CST
Comment/Review:
No, don't suffer Yami! I liked the latest chapters. They were very interesting! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 17:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Ne1 who reads thisand wants me to continue has to review even if they already reviewed. If you want Yami to get it wrong or right tell it in a review cause I'm having trouble deciding.
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Title: Nice try...
Reviewed By: WhiteRain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, using script format is a bad idea. Second off, you shouldn't give one item to much power. Third off, how did Yami get his own body? Not to mention that you got Anzu and Jou out of character, Honda and Jou are the ones who fight. Also, Yami doesn't remember anything about his past. On the plus side, you at least tried to make it original. Even if Sakura is a cannon character in Card Captor Sakura, you are making her out to be a Mary Sue because she has to much power.
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Title: *LOVED IT*
Reviewed By: Queen of the Damned [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it and the Yami and Sakura coupling is good. I think she might like him after all. I like your story very much and it was very funny.
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Reviewed By: lusciousdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 19:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Really good story, I mean it...Plus, your compliment made me blush, I'm not used to such nice compliments... I'm serious, it was such a nice and unexpected compliment, I'm still glowing...Thanks so much...I hope you continue to update this fic...
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Title: to: TAB
Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 15:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Thank you TAB you're the only one so far that ever said my YamixSakura coupling was a good idea! There's something wrong with my writing program so I won't be able to update 2 times a day like I usually do. Ja Ne!
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Title: It's pwetty good!
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every time they say 'Hai' I keep on thinking it means 'Hey.' Well, it's pwetty good so far! Sakura and Yami would actually make a cute couple. By the way, is your favorite thing to say 'Dun, dun, dun, dun, dun'? Well, anyway your fan fiction is great so far and you did a great job explaining certain stuff, though, I still think that Lee and Sakura should be together. . . Well, can't wait to the next chapter, so upload it soon!. . . Like, right now. Now. . . NOW!
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 17:19 CST
Comment/Review:
i'm really liking this story. I can't wait for the next cahpter! Oh and thanks for the song! It was beatiful!
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Reviewed By: fangirlofinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 08:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED THE HOLE THING IT WAS VERY GOOD! CONTINUE P.S: I ONLY LOVE SETO KIABA!!!!!
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Reviewed By: RyokoKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 20:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!! but you must write more or you'll let down your addoring fans! Fans:WE LOVE YOU WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE!
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 17:13 CST
Comment/Review:
you're killing me MOR!!! you just can't do that to me! I can't wait for the next chapter. Don't stop writing! Oh and thanks for mentioning me in you story! It made my day! ^_^
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Title: interesting!
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 15:37 CST
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cool story so far! I hope you continue to write it. o and about that chapter thing you gotta explain more like what exactly you did.... from my perspective when you try and look up your story it comes up but when i clicked on your profile it said that you didn't have any stories. So it might be that your user accont is either notyet fully up or it's disconnected from your story. Check and make sure that you regesterd correctly. Have you tried logining in? if you have..adn nothing else is working then just wait a couple of days and see if it works then. And if your trying to put chapters up and continue to write, just type them all up while you wait. I'm going to put this message on my reviews just in case you don't get this.
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