| "Troubled Times" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: tigermink On: February 05, 2004 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It is well written and a very fun read. I was hooked from the start. PLease Please finish this i can't wait to see how it ends.
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Title: troubled times
Reviewed By: sierra On: January 31, 2004 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story and can't wait to see chapter 5!
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Reviewed By: Beloved Fool On: January 27, 2004 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great fic, really creative and interesting although sometimes the writing was a bit repetitive with names and such. (eg: Leon did this, then leon did this, and then he did this)but apart from that it was a really good read and you gotta write more!! Pleeeaaassseeee?????
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Reviewed By: Zero C. On: January 23, 2004 03:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style of writing was consistent and enjoyable, however there were a few sentences that did seem to move out of character or seemed strange considering the situation. I do have to admit the Spelling and Grammer did waiver. There were a few problems scattered through out the piece, but since I suffer from the same problem in my own works. I really can't say much about it. As far as the Creativity of the story, it sticks well to the original story so there aren't very many deviations from the characters. But that is why I like it. It plays out as if it is just another unspokan piece of the original manga. Overall I enjoyed this piece and can't wait for you to finish. The story is enthralling and the execution keeps one intrigued. PLEASE HURRY SO THAT WE MAY ENJOY MORE OF YOUR WONDERFUL WRITING!!! ^^
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Title: troubled times
Reviewed By: padg On: January 20, 2004 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a delight to read and please please finish it!
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 03:03 CST
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Runs around screaming* sry, been doing that alot l8tly. Good ch, can't wait 4 more :-D
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 02:22 CST
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ummmm, did u get it from CCS? ooooooo, a ticked off D is fuuuuuun, unless ur the 1 he's ticked off at. ^_^ hehehehehe. Kewl story, bye
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Reviewed By: Serenitychan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time. Like Shinka said, there really aren't enough Pet Shop of Horrors fics out there. When you finish this one (which I hope is soon), I would love to see another one by you.
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Reviewed By: sierra On: January 10, 2004 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You didn't get any spelling wrong from what i noticed, and i have never read a story like the one you have written. but the reason i gave you a 8 for E.F. was because i really can't see Leon in some of the ways that you wrote him. but i like your story and hope to see the next chapter to it soon.
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Reviewed By: tigermink On: January 05, 2004 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It is well written and a very fun read. I was hooked from the start. PLease Please finish this i can't wait to see how it ends.
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Reviewed By: zork_necrophidius [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this it's great ! it's better then that there are't alot of PSOH fic's out there but this is good i hope to see up-dates soon
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Reviewed By: Shinka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 04:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yummy! This is good. There really ain't enough good PoH fics out there... *sighs* I love the way D is behaving, like, all protective and stuff. It's nice to see he has the upper hand sometimes. Hope you write more soon! Shin
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Reviewed By: madamebutterfly1983 On: January 02, 2004 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really wanna know what happens next. I'm in suspense here. Keep Writing!!!
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Reviewed By: Hells Librarian [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 10:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is turning out great! I really enjoy reading this story. I still feel bad for Leon, though, but I love how protective D is being. =) Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Hells Librarian [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 07:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! A little sad right now, but great all the same. Please do continue. =D
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