| "The difference of Martrys and murderers" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagayaku rei tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 10:13 CDT
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LOOK, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE your story and all, but it made me cry on more than one chapter!! keep up witht he great work!!
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Title: all the 10's aren't play!
Reviewed By: Lady Death [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more...that is all I gotta say. oh...and...LOVE THE STORY SOOOOOO MUCH!! I know you might get that all th time but hey, one more time couldn't hurt right? Well, I love this story and have placed it on my favorites list! If you write more I promise to review for every chapter (long reviews) from her and out! I love this story sooooo much and would appreciate it if you wrote more! You do an awesome job with your work, very original, and wonderous vocabulary list! It is an enjoyment for me to beable to read this story! I get soooo much out of it! I like it most out of all the Sess/Kags I have read! You do excellent! Keep it up! And remember! I put in my time to read your story twice and reviewed! I know you probabaly spent more time but...just a little more please! It just started getting good! Ja matta!
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Title: we want more
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 08, 2004 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have fallen in love wit this story but it has been forever since you updated. Please grace us with more and more of this story. It is truely a great work and i would love to see to out come.
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Reviewed By: sm On: June 12, 2004 03:40 CDT
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Excellent story. Looking forward to next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This a really good story at first it wuz BORING but as ti progressed I began to enjoy it. I noe that u but a lot of hard work in this and that i shouldn't just say it wuz all boring because it really wuzn't N*E*WAYZ I really did enjoy the last couple of chapters and I hope u update ASAP. u're friend/reader -Sesshomaru_Daughter
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Reviewed By: Bitch of the Highway Thieves [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 12:26 CDT
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Okay, I have to tell u something. Shhh, it's a secret! WHEN IN THE HELL ARE U GOING TO UPDATE?!?!?! I'm running on tired right now, but this story rocks. I've read it twice already, waiting for u to update, but u haven't! So freaking update! Sheesh! How is a fan to get her story if there is no story? Huh? You tell me! And in the meantime, UPDATE! Have I made myself clear? I will send my army of Highway Mongrels after u if I have to!
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Reviewed By: Lain42 On: May 10, 2004 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! HUGGLES FOR YOU! I'm waiting to see what happens next...?
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Reviewed By: GIP (Girl in Purple) On: April 26, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, finally someone has decided to write a Kagome/Sesshomaru fic without them being wildly out of character and being all romantic within the first two friggin' chapters! Well done! Now for the technicalities: I don't understand some beta readers, you seem to have a problem with verb tenses and adverbs, your beta doesn't seem to be able to catch that. Am I misinterpreting what betas do, or aren't they supposed to catch stuff like that? Oh great, now I sound all cynical, I swear, It's not me, there's this little monster that lives in my brain, I call him Edit Beastie, who loves catching grammatical mishaps. In conclusion, your fic is wonderful, I want to read more and you are a gifted human being. (I'm assuming here you are a human and not a god.)
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Title: Interesting story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Can't wait to see what Sesshomaru wants to show Kagome. Udpate soon.
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Reviewed By: Fasha On: April 06, 2004 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story and I can't wait for one of the first times out of reading 100's of Inu fanfics for an author to write the next chapter.I have never reviewed and yes I am the reader that all you author's hate because I guess you can call it read and run. But know this, if I or any others that do this do take the time to read anything even if we don't review we more than likely loved it. With acceptions to the few that are stupid enough to read something and then cridicies the author or flame them. I really feel pity for them. Will anyways, thank you for this enjoyible fic. I love all fanfics espetionly Sess/Kag. I'm killing my computer with all the fics I have on this old thing. Will good by I'm so sorry for my lovely spelling. I'm haft asleep, please forgive me.
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 01:55 CST
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please update!! great chapter!! ^_^, woow, thats kinda embarrasing though, she called out Inu Yasha's name while Sesshy was doing those things to her... what a naughty mind kagome possess... hee hee, sesshy's an addict now... an addict to looove, jp, ::im high or something, sucking to much air from whipcream can, gets you high for like 2 secs.::
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 22:42 CST
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wow. the chapters are alwys long but really worth it. they have so much in them. I'm kinda scared about the end of this one...is he gonna drop her or something? Who knows?
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27(nsi) On: March 26, 2004 19:32 CST
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Have I read dis fic sumwhere b4? I think I have! U dun have da part where Kag commits suicide though, not complainin though. That was depressing! N e wayz, I remember luving ur fic da 1st time I read it, but rite now I'm to busy to read more, so until anotha tyme k? Really luving it though!, it's kool!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 12:48 CST
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Love it...love it!! But then, almost any fic with the Taiyoukai of the West is great. I can't wait to read more soon!!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 18:04 CST
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I just read all of this stroy (so far) it's strangly interesting. I mean it's so long you'd think it'd unbearable but its not. There seems to be some intersting things in it. I appreciate how realistic you're making it. I'm happy to see that Sess-chan is finally (barely though) easing up on being such a bastard. I hope he continues to warm up and be nicer *weink weink* to Kagome.
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