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Reviewed By: Dark Angel29 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 13:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was alil odd at first, but i like it. i'm really really curious! plz continue! i'll be wait! ^_~
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Title: a lecture
Reviewed By: Chapel On: December 27, 2003 04:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. I'm surprised not many fics that feature a hanyou Kagome are that good. I'd really hate to do this and undermine your work in any way but I'm a little anal retentive and it bothered me. A 3/4 youkai is impossible. Not because of anything with the parents but because youkai are a generic spiecies like humans and NOT a nationality. If you follow basic rules of genetics (the theory created by Gregor Mendal's experiments) they should have a 3/4 chance of bearing a full youkai and a 1/4 chance of a hanyou. Im basing this off of Gregor Mendal's experiments with plants to show traits and with a punnet square you can figure out the possibillity of birth. The only reason we say 3/4 of anything is because humans distinguish themselves by nationality or country of origin rather than as a speicies with different traits for different enviroments. That is why we say a third chinese or half british. I really hope nobody flames me for this but it just bothered me to that much of an extent.
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 10, 2003 09:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep updating
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was really good can you update soon..please..
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf7 On: November 17, 2003 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this one, its a little sad but i dont mind it that much as long as theres a seme happy ending. Keep writing
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Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, though I as well do not like all the angst, but I hope for a happy ending, Hope for an update soon!
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I don't like how much angst there is, but it is still a good plot.
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Reviewed By: Inu Girl On: November 14, 2003 18:05 CST
Comment/Review:
More plese i love it AND WHEN THE HELL ARE YOU GOING TO PUT UP THE NEXT FUKING CAPTER?!?!
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Reviewed By: Elizaz On: November 11, 2003 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic !!! cant wait for more
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Reviewed By: savvii On: November 11, 2003 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fanfic. you should really write another chapter . it was great!! well cant wait buh bye, savvii
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Title: yasmin
Reviewed By: Secrets [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god ! your evil!! cliffhanger! pleas eupdate soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very soon!
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Reviewed By: Vellakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! Is promises to be good! I will tell my friends about this story! Please write more sooooooooooooonnn!!!!!! I love the sad ending thing you got there, its soooooooo sweet!!!!!!!! Overall, great story!
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Reviewed By: heninu On: November 08, 2003 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good beginning. Its something original too. I soooooo do hope you write more. I can't wait. Please write more.
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Reviewed By: piyasayo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's gonna be a great story, keep going.I'll be waiting to read more
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