| "Shadow In Her Midst" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 12:12 CDT
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Update please!!!
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Reviewed By: CSchultzzz [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very good please update soon PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEE
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Reviewed By: missy melissa On: February 14, 2004 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the great work and please update soon. sincerely, missy
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Reviewed By: girlsrock On: February 07, 2004 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WILL KILL MYSELF!!!!!!! I WILL KILL MYSELF!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! DO YOU HEAR ME?????????????
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 21:46 CST
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ACK!!!! HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!! I can't WAIT to see what happens next! Inu yasha can be such a prick sometimes lol. anyways update soon! arianna
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Reviewed By: lady scorpio On: January 24, 2004 23:56 CST
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this *sniff* is so *sniff* depressing! is the happy ending ever going to come?? please update. pleasepleasepleaseplease
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: LottaLuvGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 22:49 CST
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*tear*...if you love reviews so much...I LOVE YOU.Yes yes,the love people.Here is duuuuuu love.lmao.As you can tell....*clears throat*...that i am in a good mood right now.Some people that have been reading my story.....aparantly think it sucks.Pfft......how nice.I've also been writing poems.OMG....what a shocker.School has just been too much and other stuff....so.....w/e.I still love your story and i was waiting for the next chapter.Also,lmao.I don't write that good as a middle school.Someone said i suck at typing and my words suck...@_@
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Title: erm....
Reviewed By: LottaLuvGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 19:52 CST
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i just thought about what u said....i "AM" a middleschooler.....almost done though...and anyways....i'm trying to make my next chapter but i'm sort of...shall we say..."STUCK"....and i didn't take offense to that middle school thingie...-________-.It took me a while to....eheheh....think about that :p
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Title: HAHAHA!
Reviewed By: LottaLuvGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 03:28 CST
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I'm back and this feels great :)!That was funny about the little middle schoolers who think they know how to write.LOL!Your fic is still better than mine will ever be.I'm not kidding either...anyways.Very good job.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: December 21, 2003 17:56 CST
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OMG Kagome seriously needs 2 tell InuYasha!!! I feel so bad for her, her kassan's molding her into her own little Kikyou doll! *sighs* how sad...MAKE HER TELL INUYASHA!!! pleze? ~mikoneko-chan
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wut will happen when kikyo wakes up? if she wakes up... will she steal inuyasha away from kagome WHEN they get together?!?? (notice i said when not if) lol, srry if i'm being a bitforceful...hehe....yeah.... *change of mood* great chapter! write more soon!
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 15:58 CST
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oh my god you have to update like now!!!!! i really want to know what happens next!! do kagome and Inu yasha get together?! I REALLY REALLY HOPE SO!!!! and will kikyo ever wake up???? i must know!!!!! update soon!!!!no.... update NOW!!!!! arianna
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Reviewed By: Kym On: December 14, 2003 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! You updated!! ~*does the happy dance*~ Yea, I love those feelings too. Do you have any recomendations?I can't find any!! :( So sad This may sound stupid, but Kagome in this story reminds me or......well, me.
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Title: WooHoo
Reviewed By: LottaLuvGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 19:02 CST
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*sigh...* My computers down,but the good news is that my mom is putting my computer in another part of our house so i can have my computer time.T_T...I love my mommy....(espically when i bug her so much she just can't refuse me.lol.I'm sooo smart!)Anyways,your story is WAY better than mine.I'm not kidding either.I love your fic.It's so...unique,and I also like the way you don't make kag and inu hop into a relationship right away.That's just not how life goes. >:/
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 00:51 CST
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ooh another great chapter..what can I say about this chap and the story in general other than it pulls at your heart strings..two lonely hurting kids inside find each other and dont like one another, but hopefully will later on, but for now they are both suffering inside yet playing at being happy, being just fine..so many kids now a days do the same thing, they hide the things that hurt them inside so no one will feel pity or sypathy for them, they just want to be normal, have normal feelings, friends, to be accepted, yet inside they feel like they cant be themselves unless they are what everyone else wants them to be..ya I was like Kagome and Inu in this fic, always smiling and always being the listener, the peacemaker and the friend everyone could lean on, I was the happy free spirit that made others feel happy themselves when things in thier lives were not going so well, yet inside I wasnt always so happy or bright, inside I cried and wished just once someone would listen to me..they would of if I had told them I know but at the time I thought if i wanted friends I had to be the perfect friend, and to keep them I had to continue it and not let on that things were not always right..lol..I know much better now..finally told some dear friends of my past and pains and ya know?? they were there for me like I had always been for them..ok ok giving ya my history, so will stop anyhow I guess I love this fic because it really shows alot of emotions and yet has the basis for a happily ever after if they just let go and be themselves..wow..ok I wont babble no more except to say i love this fic and I cant wait for more updates soo like ummm update soon k?? lol ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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