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Title: WRITE MORE!!
Reviewed By: Jenn-chan On: January 25, 2004 05:46 CST
Comment/Review:
pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls write more! PLS!!!!!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer5888 On: January 24, 2004 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please write more chapters!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer5888 On: January 22, 2004 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is soooooo goood! The characters are so funny! I love this story please write more!
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Reviewed By: Kamino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 05:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
As of right now it's a bit short to give my full opinion on it; but I see a lot of potental in this fanfic. You have an intresting style that's quick-paced and your characters are bold as well as amusing. Hitomi is a lot different though, is that due to her parents' death? Critique points: 1. I noticed about 4 spelling errors, oh and it's Gaia by the way. =^.^= 2. During the scuffle in the first chapter, there was a point where it got confusing as to who was doing what to whom. Maybe you miked around a couple of 'he' and 'she' s? I really like this piece and I do hope you continue. ^^ ~Kami
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